The Blues

Listening to the Blues on this cerulean night,
my mood dark with visions of ecchymotic dreams 
leaving chalybeous bruises in my crazed mind.

I waited for the turquoise twinkle in your smiling azure eyes
to soothe the despondent indigo thoughts I'm feeling.
Like a vitreous vapor I could feel you, but you did not appear.

I guess your cold cyaneous attitude shouldn't surprise me,
it's what I deserve, after leaving your beautiful mind filled
with empty, brooding, questioning, mazarine emotions.

Now I sit here alone watching the aqua liquid of your cocktail
throwing slowly fading teal reflections on a crinkled napkin
as the argon Curacao sign blinks lonely above the empty bar.

Liquid slowly pools in the corner of my cesious eyes.
You used to call them your sapphire visions into my soul,
now they're just old and faded  like our cyanotic love affair.

It seems you have finally had enough of my broody blue moods.
I don't blame you, they've cost me more than just you in my life,
as for now I'll just wait in my livid sorrow and listen to the lonely Blues.


02/28/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Palli Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 11:42 AM
Very rich wording stirring emotions and imagination. Well done!
A   Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 12:25 PM
Hi, James... That makes us both awesome... thanks for the reply. I'm just now getting back into the grove of poetry soup....Luv...Linda
A   Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 2:06 PM
Anytime
Inman Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 1:19 PM
I agree, thank you again.
A   Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 7:39 AM
Awesome win.....Luv.Linda
Inman Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 9:42 AM
An awesome comment from an awesome person. Thank you PD.
Lindley Avatar
March 3, 2016 at 3:40 PM
NOT POSSIBLE TO LOVE THE COLOR BLUE MORE THAN I DO, MY DAUGHTER'S NICKNAME IS BLUEBABYGIRL. 7 of the 12 new cars I've owned in my long life were blue. My eyes are blue, my daughter's eyes an even prettier blue! Blue shirts, blue jeans and blue stone rings are my favorite. I WROTE A POEM HERE ABOUT THE COLOR BLUE. Exceptional poem my friend. A7
Inman Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 9:05 AM
Thanks Robert. I'm a big fan of blue myself.
La France Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 5:26 PM
James, wow, like how you incorporated all the blues in your write, wonderful, and a big congratulations and I am loving this 7 ~
Inman Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 10:12 AM
Hi BW, thank you for the great comment. I always love hearing from my favorite blue lady.
Rockwell Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 1:48 PM
Ah, now I feel like my blue is has faded almost to grey in comparison to yours!!! EXCELLENT write! Congratulations!!! Cindi
Inman Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 10:06 AM
Thanks for such kind words. I'm going to have to get back and read more of yours.
George   Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 4:37 AM
You created a masterpiece of moody blues. Many congrats on your top-notch win. Elaine
Inman Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 7:51 AM
Thank you Elaine.
Lane Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 7:24 PM
Well done and congratulations, James.
Inman Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 7:53 AM
Thank you Lin, I still have a tear in my eye from yours.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 6:11 PM
James, I applaud of the easy way you incorporated the series of blue colors within your stanzas.. :) i like best the third stanza.. =`) if this is contest for contest, am sure it will do well. =`)~Olive ELoisa =`)
Inman Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 7:54 AM
Thank you for the sweet visit, Olive.
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 5:31 PM
You managed to include a plethora of different shades of blues in your poem James and it paid off big time! Congratulations on your wonderful well deserved win my friend! #7
Inman Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 7:57 AM
Thank you Connie.
Allison Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 4:25 PM
Wonderful moody imagery James - I am not found of blue it is a very emotional colour:-( I was too late to post mine... now I feel blue! congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Inman Avatar
March 3, 2016 at 8:23 AM
Too bad, I was hoping to read it. I agree blue to me is the most emotional of colors but not just deep sad emotions. I see the azure sky and it makes me happy. I watch the turquoise waves in the ocean and it fills me with wonder. I've fallen in love with several women because of their smiling deep blue eyes and a few days ago I saw a beautiful blue bird that made me smile. Blue is my favorite color.
Allison Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 5:11 PM
I didn't post it:-( hugs jan xx
Inman Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 8:06 AM
Thanks Jan, I went to your page to read yours but I didn't see it. Did you not post it at all? I'd like to read it.
Andresen Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 5:41 AM
- Can feel your blue moods .... great written, James :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Inman Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 6:47 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise, sometimes my moods come in many different shades of blue.
Dietrich Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 6:32 PM
Hey, you should have made it Moody Blues and done Nights like white satin. heehee. OK, this is GREAT writing, my friend. The language is very elevated and you are a smart cookie because that is the way S.O. likes a poem to be. I expect to see this one way up on the winners' list (mine, not so much.)
Inman Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 6:59 PM
Haha, thanks Andrea.
Davey Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 5:03 PM
"Wait for you in my livid sorrow", such emotion in that line! Your use of uncommon words throughout this piece was exceptional, good job friend!
Inman Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 5:39 PM
Thanks for the kind words Brian.
Godwin Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 3:33 PM
Never knew so many words existed for 'blue' until this contest. Now that I have admitted my ignorance, I will share that I love the emotion in your write and can relate to the feeling, even with the dictionary-required words. All the best to you always and in the contest ... CayCay
Inman Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 6:44 AM
CayCay, what happened to my reply. I know I wrote one. I think my ghost, Vladimir, must have erased it. I laughed at your comment because it took a dictionary to write it. Thanks for the kindness.
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