The Blue Rose

The little boy reclined in his bed.
Out of reach, by his foot, a blue rose lay.
His mom had been looking for quite a while
for something she thought would make his day.

Where did this come from mama?
She moved it to within his grasp.
When the little boy touched its stem
His mother’s computer recorded a gasp.

The rose, rather limp, in a sad sort of state,
stood straight and firm, back from the dead.
And as he and mom stared in wonder;
one by one by one, each petal turned red.

His short hair, mistaken at first glance
for a buzz cut, military style.
Revealed upon closer inspection,
radiation treatments for a long, long while. 

Fact is, this was his last night with mom,
with his cat and his parakeet.
His last night with this magic rose,
left, again wilting, on the sheet.

Later when she could bear the pain,
she went back and gathered his clothes.
All the things of his, she should keep,
but, she could not find the red, red rose.

As she made her way down the long hall,
she glanced from the elevator door,
at a frail little wisp of a girl in bed,
and a long stemmed blue rose on the floor.  

© Jun 15 2010  For Mac's "Blue Rose" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 4:06 AM
Congratulations Charles on your win in Mac McGovern's contest "The Blue Rose" Love, Carol
George   Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 5:44 AM
Congratulations! On your so well deserved win, Charles. I enjoyed this poem very much. Lainie
Conway Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 2:57 PM
They say blue roses are majic- You sure captured it with this one!~Tirzah~
Sweetheart Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 9:40 PM
Congrats Charles on your big win in the Blue Rose contest. a glorious write and win to enjoy..with luv from the "Sweetheart"
Johnson Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 7:15 PM
Cngratulations on your win. this is a lvoeluy stry. Love,Joyce
Clark Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 7:10 PM
Awesome story here........Congratulations on your win! Way to go! Jeralynn
Mcgovern Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 6:21 PM
Congratulations on 2nd place in my contest. a superb entry.
Strand Avatar
June 15, 2010 at 11:16 PM
Than you Charles for the much valued honour you bestowed on my poem.Rgds Brian
Mehta Avatar
June 15, 2010 at 7:47 PM
You have rendered the feelings in an impressive way. Good luck in the contest.
Johnson Avatar
June 15, 2010 at 7:28 PM
Great poem and heart rending. Good luck in the contest. It is lovely. Love, Joyce
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