Notes About The Poem
This is about when Doris, our daughter, was eleven years old and had to have surgery for scoliosis..The doctor had said that she would be in surgery about four hours and in recovery about two hours..When it went beyond four hours, I started to panic..They allowed us to call and talk to the nurse in the operating room..Shortly the doctor who was in charge came down..He said that they had had to give her four pints of blood but they were watching her very closely and would not let it get too low..She recovered and did fine but it was a frightening ordeal..Sara

The Blood Bled Red

"Each experience is locked within my heart
and I hold the key"...Constance La France

The doctor came from the operating room
Blood splattered scrubs, blood on glasses and said
"We've given her four pints of blood"_clouds loom
The doctor came from the operating room
A heavy mist covered my heart with gloom
Pondering gravity of red blood that bled
The doctor came from operating room
Blood splattered scrubs, blood on glasses, and said

Contest:Fragment Of Life
Sponsor: Constance La France
Penned by Sara Kendrick
This twenty-second day of 
August, 2011
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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K. Avatar
August 28, 2011 at 12:47 PM
Wow, that sure must have been such a frightening time for you and your write here is so vivid... I am glad to know that she was ok after... super congrats on your win here, Sara!
Dietrich Avatar
August 28, 2011 at 1:33 AM
forgot to ever come back here and say CONGRATULATIONS on your win, Sara. And have a great Sunday. LUv, Andrea
Susan Avatar
August 27, 2011 at 8:23 PM
That sounds like a scary ordeal! especially w/all that blood everywhere! glad it all turned out okay in the end. congratulations on your win!
Mannan Avatar
August 26, 2011 at 11:42 PM
I am so glad your daughter did well, Sara. many congrats for this win.
Horne Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 5:05 PM
Clever write. Many congrats to you, Sara : )
The Rogue Rhymer Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 4:37 PM
Sara-Great job-I love how you ended it. I'm also very glad that she is ok.
Lane Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 3:15 PM
You are in my prayers today. Tony
Johnson Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 2:50 PM
I hope this isn't more sad news for you Sara but congratulations on your top ten win. Love, Joyce
Kearley Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 2:33 PM
Congrats Sara,on this winning write.
Brown Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 2:25 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Constance's "A Fragment of Life" contest Sara. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 12:22 PM
this is a real winner, dear sara.. sunny congrats on your special win :) huggs
Sweetheart Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 11:13 AM
Congrats Sara on an exciting win with this excellent expression in poetry my friend.. awesome and one I missed previously luv..
Williams Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 10:04 AM
hey Sara,congrats on your win, scary stuff when it's your kids going through these things, David
Johnson Avatar
August 23, 2011 at 6:32 PM
oooh gory red babe, frightening stuff, just had a shave, whats that red stuff:) xo,
Moriarty Avatar
August 23, 2011 at 2:45 PM
This sounds like O'Henry's "The Lady or the Tiger" kind of unkind to leave us hanging isn't it?
Dietrich Avatar
August 23, 2011 at 10:01 AM
HI, Sara, I enjoyed seeing the note that went with your interesting triolet. I am glad she recovered!
Doreus Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 5:30 PM
Wow this is really deep. The weight of those words is tremendous... I entered a poem in that contest called I can't and won't live without you
Skyles-Theoklapoet Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 5:20 PM
OMG Sara my mouth fell open until I read your note and found out she was ok.Yes my poem"SECRET"was based on a newspaper artical.Thanks for the comment.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa
Sivey Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 12:24 PM
What a great poem, sad, but truly great! I hope that whoever was in the operating room turned out alright!! Good write!!
La France Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 12:02 PM
I am so sorry you are having issues posting this poem to my contest, I wonder if others are having the same problem, I hope the admin can rectify the problem asap.. Sara keep trying and if I need to add spaces to the contest, I will, just keep me informed, please, and btw, a very emotional write, poor little girl, and poor Mommy~~
Onclaud Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 11:42 AM
a fusion of shock and relief, sara... a most dramatic portayal of a life-threatening scene.. fascinating.. best winning wishes! :) huggs, nette
Smith Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 10:31 AM
What a fright. I hope she came through well. More than that, I hope this poem isn't true about something that happened with you.
Long Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 9:40 AM
this was beautifully penned glad she pulled through. good luck in the contest.. love cory
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