The Blood Bled Red

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Sara Kendrick.


This is about when Doris, our daughter, was eleven years old and had to have surgery for scoliosis..The doctor had said that she would be in surgery about four hours and in recovery about two hours..When it went beyond four hours, I started to panic..They allowed us to call and talk to the nurse in the operating room..Shortly the doctor who was in charge came down..He said that they had had to give her four pints of blood but they were watching her very closely and would not let it get too low..She recovered and did fine but it was a frightening ordeal..Sara
"Each experience is locked within my heart
and I hold the key"...Constance La France

The doctor came from the operating room
Blood splattered scrubs, blood on glasses and said
"We've given her four pints of blood"_clouds loom
The doctor came from the operating room
A heavy mist covered my heart with gloom
Pondering gravity of red blood that bled
The doctor came from operating room
Blood splattered scrubs, blood on glasses, and said

Contest:Fragment Of Life
Sponsor: Constance La France
Penned by Sara Kendrick
This twenty-second day of 
August, 2011
*Note _Click on about this poem

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/28/2011 12:47:00 PM
Wow, that sure must have been such a frightening time for you and your write here is so vivid... I am glad to know that she was ok after... super congrats on your win here, Sara!
Login to Reply
Date: 8/28/2011 1:33:00 AM
forgot to ever come back here and say CONGRATULATIONS on your win, Sara. And have a great Sunday. LUv, Andrea
Login to Reply
Date: 8/27/2011 8:23:00 PM
That sounds like a scary ordeal! especially w/all that blood everywhere! glad it all turned out okay in the end. congratulations on your win!
Login to Reply
Date: 8/26/2011 11:42:00 PM
I am so glad your daughter did well, Sara. many congrats for this win.
Login to Reply
Date: 8/25/2011 5:05:00 PM
Clever write. Many congrats to you, Sara : )
Login to Reply
Date: 8/25/2011 4:37:00 PM
Sara-Great job-I love how you ended it. I'm also very glad that she is ok.
Login to Reply
Date: 8/25/2011 3:15:00 PM
You are in my prayers today. Tony
Login to Reply
Date: 8/25/2011 2:50:00 PM
I hope this isn't more sad news for you Sara but congratulations on your top ten win. Love, Joyce
Login to Reply
Date: 8/25/2011 2:33:00 PM
Congrats Sara,on this winning write.
Login to Reply
Date: 8/25/2011 2:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Constance's "A Fragment of Life" contest Sara. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 8/25/2011 12:22:00 PM
this is a real winner, dear sara.. sunny congrats on your special win :) huggs
Login to Reply
Date: 8/25/2011 11:13:00 AM
Congrats Sara on an exciting win with this excellent expression in poetry my friend.. awesome and one I missed previously luv..
Login to Reply
Date: 8/25/2011 10:04:00 AM
hey Sara,congrats on your win, scary stuff when it's your kids going through these things, David
Login to Reply
Date: 8/23/2011 6:32:00 PM
oooh gory red babe, frightening stuff, just had a shave, whats that red stuff:) xo,
Login to Reply
Date: 8/23/2011 2:45:00 PM
This sounds like O'Henry's "The Lady or the Tiger" kind of unkind to leave us hanging isn't it?
Login to Reply
Date: 8/23/2011 10:01:00 AM
HI, Sara, I enjoyed seeing the note that went with your interesting triolet. I am glad she recovered!
Login to Reply
Date: 8/22/2011 5:30:00 PM
Wow this is really deep. The weight of those words is tremendous... I entered a poem in that contest called I can't and won't live without you
Login to Reply
Date: 8/22/2011 5:20:00 PM
OMG Sara my mouth fell open until I read your note and found out she was ok.Yes my poem"SECRET"was based on a newspaper artical.Thanks for the comment.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa
Login to Reply
Date: 8/22/2011 12:24:00 PM
What a great poem, sad, but truly great! I hope that whoever was in the operating room turned out alright!! Good write!!
Login to Reply
Date: 8/22/2011 12:02:00 PM
I am so sorry you are having issues posting this poem to my contest, I wonder if others are having the same problem, I hope the admin can rectify the problem asap.. Sara keep trying and if I need to add spaces to the contest, I will, just keep me informed, please, and btw, a very emotional write, poor little girl, and poor Mommy~~
Login to Reply
Date: 8/22/2011 11:42:00 AM
a fusion of shock and relief, sara... a most dramatic portayal of a life-threatening scene.. fascinating.. best winning wishes! :) huggs, nette
Login to Reply
Date: 8/22/2011 10:31:00 AM
What a fright. I hope she came through well. More than that, I hope this poem isn't true about something that happened with you.
Login to Reply
Date: 8/22/2011 9:40:00 AM
this was beautifully penned glad she pulled through. good luck in the contest.. love cory
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter