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This is about when Doris, our daughter, was eleven years old and had to have surgery for scoliosis..The doctor had said that she would be in surgery about four hours and in recovery about two hours..When it went beyond four hours, I started to panic..They allowed us to call and talk to the nurse in the operating room..Shortly the doctor who was in charge came down..He said that they had had to give her four pints of blood but they were watching her very closely and would not let it get too low..She recovered and did fine but it was a frightening ordeal..Sara
"Each experience is locked within my heart and I hold the key"...Constance La France The doctor came from the operating room Blood splattered scrubs, blood on glasses and said "We've given her four pints of blood"_clouds loom The doctor came from the operating room A heavy mist covered my heart with gloom Pondering gravity of red blood that bled The doctor came from operating room Blood splattered scrubs, blood on glasses, and said Contest:Fragment Of Life Sponsor: Constance La France Penned by Sara Kendrick This twenty-second day of August, 2011 *Note _Click on about this poem

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Date: 8/28/2011 12:47:00 PM
Wow, that sure must have been such a frightening time for you and your write here is so vivid... I am glad to know that she was ok after... super congrats on your win here, Sara!
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Date: 8/28/2011 1:33:00 AM
forgot to ever come back here and say CONGRATULATIONS on your win, Sara. And have a great Sunday. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/27/2011 8:23:00 PM
That sounds like a scary ordeal! especially w/all that blood everywhere! glad it all turned out okay in the end. congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/26/2011 11:42:00 PM
I am so glad your daughter did well, Sara. many congrats for this win.
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Date: 8/25/2011 5:05:00 PM
Clever write. Many congrats to you, Sara : )
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Date: 8/25/2011 4:37:00 PM
Sara-Great job-I love how you ended it. I'm also very glad that she is ok.
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Date: 8/25/2011 3:15:00 PM
You are in my prayers today. Tony
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Date: 8/25/2011 2:50:00 PM
I hope this isn't more sad news for you Sara but congratulations on your top ten win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/25/2011 2:33:00 PM
Congrats Sara,on this winning write.
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Date: 8/25/2011 2:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Constance's "A Fragment of Life" contest Sara. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/25/2011 12:22:00 PM
this is a real winner, dear sara.. sunny congrats on your special win :) huggs
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Date: 8/25/2011 11:13:00 AM
Congrats Sara on an exciting win with this excellent expression in poetry my friend.. awesome and one I missed previously luv..
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Date: 8/25/2011 10:04:00 AM
hey Sara,congrats on your win, scary stuff when it's your kids going through these things, David
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Date: 8/23/2011 6:32:00 PM
oooh gory red babe, frightening stuff, just had a shave, whats that red stuff:) xo,
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Date: 8/23/2011 2:45:00 PM
This sounds like O'Henry's "The Lady or the Tiger" kind of unkind to leave us hanging isn't it?
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Date: 8/23/2011 10:01:00 AM
HI, Sara, I enjoyed seeing the note that went with your interesting triolet. I am glad she recovered!
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Date: 8/22/2011 5:30:00 PM
Wow this is really deep. The weight of those words is tremendous... I entered a poem in that contest called I can't and won't live without you
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Date: 8/22/2011 5:20:00 PM
OMG Sara my mouth fell open until I read your note and found out she was ok.Yes my poem"SECRET"was based on a newspaper artical.Thanks for the comment.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa
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Date: 8/22/2011 12:24:00 PM
What a great poem, sad, but truly great! I hope that whoever was in the operating room turned out alright!! Good write!!
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Date: 8/22/2011 12:02:00 PM
I am so sorry you are having issues posting this poem to my contest, I wonder if others are having the same problem, I hope the admin can rectify the problem asap.. Sara keep trying and if I need to add spaces to the contest, I will, just keep me informed, please, and btw, a very emotional write, poor little girl, and poor Mommy~~
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Date: 8/22/2011 11:42:00 AM
a fusion of shock and relief, sara... a most dramatic portayal of a life-threatening scene.. fascinating.. best winning wishes! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 8/22/2011 10:31:00 AM
What a fright. I hope she came through well. More than that, I hope this poem isn't true about something that happened with you.
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Date: 8/22/2011 9:40:00 AM
this was beautifully penned glad she pulled through. good luck in the contest.. love cory
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