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The Blink of An Eye

The chances that we get ~ You never know when they'll end? In the blink of an eye Your or them, and then.... Why is it so hard to see So hard to be? Awaken, from your dreams! The hardest of hearts, is the hardest of all A chain, a chain and a ball Deeper and deeper and deeper, you fall.... Days turn to years and years disappear And never again ~ Chances that we get; people that we've known The loves, the lives, your very own Here, then gone, and what Saying goodbye.... Why, is it so hard to see So hard to be, free to see?! In the blink of an eye ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ....“Awaken, From Your Sleep” ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/5/2012 11:09:00 PM
This is more than a great poem, John. It's a prayer and a plea from a heart that loves. Forever we've been told that tomorrow is never promised! As always, you have something to say that needs saying! Love, Annalise
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Date: 6/18/2011 4:27:00 AM
You describe the fleeting moment so weel. I really enjoyed.
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Date: 6/5/2011 12:19:00 PM
wow, i loved it, has a deep emotional feel to it,,,,,please read my forsaken if you get a chance,,,thanks...
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Date: 5/30/2011 6:17:00 AM
Very clever poem John,very deep.. If in the blink of an eye we could change the world in a better one,my eyes wouldnt bet and my lashes wouldnt flutter anymore,it feels so good to have you back,to write amongst our family'soup' :)C.C
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Date: 6/2/2011 5:58:00 PM
~My Sweeet Johnny Angel.. here tis Sweeet-Kiss'ess
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Date: 6/2/2011 8:19:00 AM
~Smile.. I see you still have my heart blocked.. tis be.. I must then say.. My Sweeet Darling... Have a Nice day... Your Love always.....
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Date: 5/30/2011 2:42:00 PM
Days turn to years and years disappear And never again ~Chances that we get;even when tis be.. comes to True Love.. yes my Darling.. You speak Truth.. within your heart.. compassionate and tis Ever so True... Wake up Darling.. I Love YOU.. we are here today.. but tomorrow maybe.. like the wind.. Sweeet Johnny.. Life is too short.. as I know within my heart.. as I know & believe tis in yours too.. True Love tis not a myth.. beholding dreams for "You & Me' True.. Blessing..My Sweeeet Honeycomb..
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Date: 5/30/2011 2:32:00 PM
~moments pass.. tis be.. like looking in a looking glass.. My Darling dear.. for what time.. tis left here.. upon this earth.. let's not waist.. as we know.. True Love.. tis No mistake.. "I Love You'' as I know.. you Love me.. too.. as tis song be.. come on baby Light my fire.. you know tis would be untrue.. I would be a liar.. for If I was to say to you.. we couldn't get much higher.. come.. baby Light my Fire!!.. Smile.. as we know.. Life is too short
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Date: 5/30/2011 2:26:00 PM
~as i read.. tis your beautiful writes.. I tried again to leave.. your heart my delight.. my heartfelt coms just for you.. my sweeet.... time after time.. but tis be.. tho.. I want you to know.. You are.. and always be.. Still within my heart ever so deep.. Come sweeet.. walk with me.. talk with me.. tell me that I am yours.. as I tell you your mine.. as we know.. lets not waist any more time.. Life is too short.. for tis be.. I miss you my Darling..
Date: 5/30/2011 5:07:00 AM
Well said... embrace today fo tomorrow may change....Michael
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