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The Blame Game

Seeking to find serenity is a task I cannot take for most of all it seems to me a mindless missing mandate. Buddha has achieved serenity, at least that what some say. Yet, in my mind dear Sylvia* found death in a similar way. To not exist, to cease to be, will bring the sought for feeling, many find this door to out, but, it leaves my head reeling. Can I not change, the path I'm on, can I not choose another? Will I blame an omnipotent God, will I blame my brothers? No, I'll accept, live and breathe, the form which I've been given, and I'll forgive myself each step, and so, I will be shriven. For I've been made with God's own seed, a God am I so born I'll not blame another man or take credit from the unformed. *Sylvia Plath (10/27/32 – 2/11/63) was an American poet, novelist and short story writer who commited suicide.

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Date: 4/20/2012 12:03:00 PM
admired this piece since i laid my eyes on it the first time around.. sweets congrats on your high win, debbie... huggs:)
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Date: 4/19/2012 5:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in Susan's "Blame It on the Rain" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/18/2012 11:00:00 PM
Wow Debbie this poem rocks, I did not know whether to cry, gasp or rage at yet another person that choses suicide, it is such a dark, horrible way to go. A few months ago, I read about a soldier that served twice and then went back to being a police officer. He was off-duty and stopped to pick up some fast-food, inside was a young boy that did not have enough to buy his meal with, the policeman paid and even bought him a bigger meal, then he and the young boy chatted for about a half hour.
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Jane Richer
Date: 4/18/2012 11:05:00 PM
He left and was walking to his policecar, a shot rang out and he was dead, a random drive by shooting. The young boy was interviewed and asked what the policeman had told him. He was about to give up trying to be a basketball player and the officer convinced him to keep on trying and never give up!
Date: 4/18/2012 6:34:00 PM
This is a wonderful poem Debbie! Congratulations on these great words ...Samia
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Date: 4/18/2012 1:05:00 PM
Congrats on a nice write........George
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Date: 4/18/2012 10:09:00 AM
Debbie congrats on your win, great poem strong words, love Sylvia...David
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Date: 4/18/2012 9:35:00 AM
congrats on a great win Debbie
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Date: 4/18/2012 9:34:00 AM
congratulations on your winning poem in the blame game. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/18/2012 8:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your #3 win in my contest!
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Date: 1/26/2012 4:55:00 PM
another beauty Debbie.. congrats on another tremendous win ..luv that title too..
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Date: 1/26/2012 5:19:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in Nette's "Serenity Response" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/26/2012 4:33:00 AM
bl congrats you on your win, loved and enjoyed, bl
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Date: 1/18/2012 5:26:00 PM
Good luck in the contest Debbie! Sernity is hard to find - especially when you live in the exciting but endlessly changing NYC. Have you ever read "The Bell Jr"? I have only read some of Sylvia Plath's verse. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 1/18/2012 7:45:00 AM
I like it girl......no whingers please!!....and Dylan T is on e of my top poets .............. "rage rage against " is absolu what i myself feel......best wishes Syd
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Date: 1/17/2012 6:48:00 PM
Good set of couplets Debbie. I presume the "Sylvia" you mentioned in your second verse is the late Sylvia Plath.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/18/2012 9:21:00 AM
Sylvia Plath (October 27, 1932 – February 11, 1963) was an American poet, novelist and short story writer.
Date: 1/17/2012 1:30:00 PM
:) love the message behind this one, Deb! Some feel serenity comes with death, but it is important to live life to the fullest and make each moment count. You chose great quotes from AA and Dylan Thomas to carry this poem home. Surely a winner! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/17/2012 7:28:00 AM
hi debs... thanks for joining . soup mail!..:) huggs
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Date: 1/17/2012 6:26:00 AM
Well done indeed Debbie and thank you for supporting my contest..) also thank you for your great comments..!
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