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The Blades of the Third Eye

the blades of the third eye open electric sleep sits and runs for death a coffin writes a promise with rich, ruddy dirt a poet sinks in his eyes and coughs winds ride the cold shout of crippled prayers a wolf flows in distant sands howling white moon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/14/2013 7:11:00 PM
Alex, , CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem FEATURED on the soups Home Page:-). Good-Night **Linda**
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Date: 9/5/2013 11:20:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Morgan
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Date: 9/5/2013 5:57:00 PM
very interesting imagery. congrats to you.
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Date: 9/4/2013 7:07:00 PM
congrats on your win, enjoyed this poem :)
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Date: 9/4/2013 6:27:00 PM
A lovely win ALEX... skat
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Date: 9/4/2013 7:59:00 AM
Good morning Alex, , congratulations in Nathan's any poem contest... always..Linda
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Date: 8/26/2013 8:40:00 PM
Hi Alex, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat *
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Date: 8/26/2013 11:00:00 AM
Hello Alex, i got one title and word for you EPIC~ :-) , thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 8/26/2013 12:11:00 PM
Linda, I read "Of Ink" and left you a comment. Thanks for the warm welcome and support. --Alex
Date: 8/26/2013 10:30:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Alex ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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Alex Roth
Date: 8/26/2013 12:15:00 PM
Anne, I read "Unkissed Lips" and I typed a comment. Thanks for welcoming me and for taking the time to read my first P-soup submission. --Alex

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