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The Birthday Gift

I’ve an inexcusable habit, forget my wife’s birthday. This time I promise myself I won’t. So, on that day from backyard I pluck a blooming red rose, keep it hidden till the dinner time when I give her the single flower. She doesn’t smile, for the story has begun.

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Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/1/2025 6:26:00 AM

This intro would surely be a lure for me. I would HAVE to read the story. Subimal, CONGRATS on your will! Janice

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/2/2025 12:39:00 AM

Thank you, Janice for your read and comment.

Suzette Richards

Date: 6/30/2025 11:53:00 PM

Congratulations on your 3rd place win, Subimal, with this subtle tale. The gift-as-fuse metaphor is quietly explosive. You were one of the few poets who read the full contest description: text and the visual prompt that lent its name to the contest. It harmonises with the crow’s sardonic grin, but from a different perch—less brazen, more fatalistic.

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/2/2025 12:38:00 AM

Thank you so much, Suzette for the placement and for your wonderful appraisal of and comments on the poem that I value very much.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/30/2025 8:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your "The Birthday Gift" write. Have a blessed day with your win.........

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/2/2025 12:34:00 AM

Thank you, Paula.