THE BIRTHDAY

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Note: Aug 28 :For more on Marc&Bella artistic romance in life&art

https://arthive.com/publications/4209~Love_story_in_paintings_Marc_Chagall_and_Bella_Rosenfeld

Marc opened the window-in streamed Bella his first love

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Gary Radice

Date: 8/29/2024 1:05:00 AM

Your love of poetry and art shines Brian.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/28/2024 2:32:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Great artwork. Sara K

thriveni c mysore

Date: 8/27/2024 10:32:00 PM

love happens only when one give access to that emotion, instead of man-woman word usage, employing names has solved that problem, beautiful thought dear poet. creative way of saying window- heart. lofty thought I very much appreciate this a-liner. congratulations dear poet. cheers.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 8/28/2024 1:44:00 AM

I correct myself here dear poet, I didn't know the background of this painting. read about the flying lovers. thank you for this knowledge dear poet.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/27/2024 6:04:00 AM

So beautiful a sentiment! We oft see her flying by kite or otherwise. In this poetic fete, you have the initial meeting, Bella sails through the window! Fave! Congrats, Brian!

Karen Jones

Date: 8/27/2024 5:03:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in the contest dear poet!