The Birth of Love

Summer swimmers began to depart.
Waves were no longer calm but rumbled with unease.
Kiosks and bar dismantled their wares.
It made me sick to see all gone.

Where was my Cynthia whom I loved so much?
Disappeared without a trace or a good-bye.
She had forsaken me without a reason.
I packed my things and went back home.
Seattle began its blasted drizzle.

Autumn is back with a vengeance.
Leaves changed their greenish hues	
into brown, russet, or golden themes,
a kaleidoscope of prismatic colours.
Trees turn bare only slippery grass remained.
I wandered round the wet streets,
I wondered where my Cynthia were.
I entered my favourite coffee shop.
And there she was smiling impishly.
She served me a latte and gave me a kiss.

Leaves flutter slowly to the ground,
a carpet strewn all over the paths
that zigzag through the lonely gardens
or long forgotten forest trails,
whilst fragrant flowers wilt and wither
Yet it was the birth of love.
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Date: 9/17/2025 9:25:00 AM
The transition from summer to autumn is well illustrated. You were both overjoyed when love, which had been concealed, was finally revealed. You are so creative and full of love! Vitor
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Date: 9/17/2025 7:34:00 AM
Hello Victor, I was captivated by the way you used the changing seasons to reflect the changing emotions of the narrator. The transition from the sickness of loss in summer to the cold, searching feel of autumn, and then the sudden warmth of reunion at the end is so wonderfully done. It really brings the whole journey together. Blessings, Victor, Daniel
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Date: 9/17/2025 4:11:00 AM
Dear Victor, you are immensely fanciful and romantic! The change from summer to autumn is so beautifully delineated. Love in hide finally came out to delight both of you. Lovely penning.
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Date: 9/17/2025 3:13:00 AM
Dearest Victor a beautiful love poem from you. I'm so glad that despite the wet streets and Autums vengeance you managed to meet the sweet Cynthia. Looks like love will always find a way. Hugs
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Date: 9/17/2025 1:54:00 AM
Love will always find its home. Lovely poetry Victor… Beryl
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Date: 9/17/2025 2:27:00 AM
Thank you, dear Beryl. I am awaiting your new poem. Victor
Date: 9/17/2025 1:16:00 AM
Life, nature, feelings, emotions entwined beautifully in this poem.
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