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The Birth of Daybreak

I stood on the shoreline of a tranquil lake,
eager for the glorious birth of daybreak
when the hint of burgundy, colored the sky;
a signal to gulls, "Time to take wing and fly."

Tangerine hues flowed from God's paint brush
to color Dawn's cheeks a deep shade of blush.
I waited with expectation for the sun to arise
Its brilliance was ascending before my eyes.

I felt a glowing warmth gently touch my face
as he climbed from repose in an unhurried pace.
There glimmered a soft light over ruffling waves.
Scenes like this, my camera captures and saves.

*A collaboration between myself and Jenna Logan*
The picture was taken at my secret fishing spot on Sunday morning
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Allison Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 2:20 PM
what an incredible collaboration I adore the image and imagery, well done to the two of you you write so seamlessly it is a joy to read today:-) hugs jan xx
Koplin Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 5:09 PM
Thank you so much Jan, your gracious comment is very much appreciated my friend!
Cunningham Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 8:20 AM
A beautiful collaboration Mark and Jenna, the birth of a new day captured well in your verse. Love the picture too Mark. Tom. PS. A secret no more Mark, next time you go you'll find a crowd there.
Koplin Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 10:49 AM
Thanks Tom, I would be happy to share that sunrise with anyone
Mcintosh Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 5:22 AM
This is beautiful... such a tranquil and promising inspiration. It feeds my soul. God bless you with many more :)
Koplin Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 8:01 AM
Thank you so much Regina! Jenna really deserves an honor with this one
Logan Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 4:45 AM
Your sunrise photograph was inspirational, Mark. Thank you for the opportunity to combine your capture with my thoughts in poetic verse.
Logan Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 5:28 AM
Thank you, Mark. A sunrise like this one would humble anyone, as much as your compliment does me.
Koplin Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 5:19 AM
Thank you Jenna, it was an absolute pleasure to work with such amazing talent!
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