The Birdbath

The first is like an imaginary vision;
a tiny apparition, in three quick flashes.
The landing, one sip, then disappearing,

sweet fairy wren.

Then, there is the brazen, full, plop of the Currawong;
raucous, self proclaiming
 with flapping ablutions

and on exit, stealing one
of the floating silk lilies.

Suzanne Delaney
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Gauthier Avatar
May 27, 2021 at 11:15 AM
Bravo ~ beautifully crafted ~
Tacito Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 11:03 PM
For such a seemingly light-hearted title, these lines hit hard. Very, very enjoyable read.
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June 6, 2013 at 10:14 PM
Suz, thank you for supporting my contest... Congratulations! love~ Linda
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May 21, 2013 at 8:30 AM
What vivid and riveting images! Your language is sublime... I love '...flapping ablutions!' Well done Suzanne!! Best wishes, Keith
Posey Avatar
May 21, 2013 at 3:52 AM
Absolutely stunning poetry. I could hear their singing as they came out to play... Jake
Anglesey Avatar
May 19, 2013 at 3:13 AM
Very imaginative and lively. Really like the last line as a finishing touch. Excellent
Collins Avatar
May 15, 2013 at 7:31 AM
Hi Again, I've seen this too. We have crows! The bird feeder is a free-for-all. love, Kathy
Squyres Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 4:48 PM
I was there.. I saw it all !! Great write !! You drew me into the scene as it played out !!
Gunatillake Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 12:08 PM
Dear Suzanne I commented on this poem below. I have written a pantoum. pls let me know your comments. love manel
Sibanda Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 10:39 AM
Enjoyed reading your piece. Congrats on your lifetime membership!
Gorelick Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 7:09 AM
Not sure what a currawong looks like, but Im going to look it up. Nice piece! >
Kendrick Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 6:03 AM
Cute one..Got a chuckle..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by to let me know that I placed in your contest..I haven't had a chance to check all the contest winners out yet but will get around to it..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 5:53 AM
oh how funny, especially that last bird in the bath!!! Stealing a lily. So cute.
Liwayway Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 5:06 AM
superb write friend Suzanne...thanks for dropping by..have a nice day :) Maria
Oyewole Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 4:21 AM
Thanks for this beautiful descriptive gem of yours. Very well written.
Trifiatis Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 3:39 AM
Capturing eternity in a verse! Amazing! Thank you!
Hicks Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 2:39 AM
You have a great ability for the minutest details. Many would skim over and grab the more obvious details... but you really capture the moment! I wish I had a better vocabulary for you seem to use really strange words that are kinda foreign to me. Ablutions? Beside the point though... you really know how to put power into sparse words. Awesome...
Gunatillake Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 2:29 AM
Coming out from a true nature lover. IT paints beautiful picture the Currawong stealing a lily. Ver nice
Omara Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 1:41 AM
Thought this started out as a rather lovely poem then I got to "currawong" and it got even better and better still when I looked at your blog. What's a nice Tasmanian girl doing in a place like this?-Red
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May 14, 2013 at 12:46 AM
Your snapshots of the visitation of birds delightfully capture some of nature's interaction with the world of humans. Wonderfull, Suz! David
Wilson Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 12:20 AM
I can picture this birdbath with your wonderful descriptions!! love,Deb
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