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The Bird and The Worm

Crawling upon desecrated ashes, whispers haunt ~ “You will never make it.” Vermilion skies rumble over the brutal horizon, splitting open as a deafening rain pours forth, drenching an already collapsing body. Splaying nails rip into hollow earth. Eerie silhouettes dance in the lightning flashes. It’s getting harder to see now — fear surging, lungs straining, losing control. Darkness engulfs, swallowing the sun. Panic sets in; urgency is now a must, for night brings what cannot be spoken. Cortisol spikes, muscles spasm. Faster, he must crawl ~ death is imminent if he cannot find the door. Feeling blindly through infectious petrichor, his palms meet nothing but cold decay. Macabre laughter circles around him. Praying, he reaches out one more time — unsuccessfully. Closing his eyes, red-hot pain flows over his flesh, devoured by the very demons he could not escape.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 5/2/2025 8:38:00 PM
I chose this poem as a top in my contest because there is a musicality to it that matches the song "The Bird and the Worm" by the Used (which I love) but the author employs their own language that makes the style unique. Exactly what I was looking for and I love "Feeling blindly through infectious petrichor, his palms meet nothing but cold decay." Thank you!
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Sara Jama
Date: 5/4/2025 5:32:00 AM
Thank you very much for placing me.
Date: 4/27/2025 1:51:00 PM
Demons. Nasty buggers. I keep a can of Raid close by.
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/27/2025 3:12:00 PM
Raid's cheaper. It's demon busting on a budget
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Sara Jama
Date: 4/27/2025 2:42:00 PM
Raid why don't you get a can of Demon be gone. Lol
Date: 3/11/2025 11:25:00 PM
Wow! A deep poem at all levels, Sara:)
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Sara Jama
Date: 4/27/2025 1:10:00 PM
Thank you so much.
Date: 3/7/2025 8:25:00 PM
Holy shit, The Used could never. The chills started at"splitting open as a deafening rain pours forth," and I was hypnotized henceforth; beautifully done.
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Sara Jama
Date: 4/27/2025 1:11:00 PM
Thank you so much for the kind words and placing me in your contest.

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