The Big Event

Congratulations on your win in Gwendolen's "Big Kid Tongue Twister" contest Debbie. Love, Carol

Congrats on your "D" twister. BG

Good one..Congrats..Sara

Big twisting event Deb, Congrats on your win. Agape, Moses

Congrats Debbie on a top ten sweet success with this great tongue twister luv.. any snow your way?? we have four inches already and counting..luv..

Dangling Debbie's kitty is the best critique' of poetry I've seen here! She (or he) should sponsor a contest!! Congrats to the both of you !!

I pondered the answer to this tongue twisting caper...I think she let him fall on purpose!! ha ha. Congrats to you, Debbie, on your winning place in my contest. Always a pleasure to read your work! Love, OH, also....great that you have gotten your lil cat as an audience. :)

Congratulations on the win in the contest of Gwen, Debbie

As Tony landed on his feet. He was so heavy they got stuck in the peat. These farmyard antics and traveling show's. Took their toll as they dug up his toes. Dangling Debbie just hung up above. Confused how she felt, devoid of love. No way to get down, they brought in a crane. Now Daring Debbie walks around half insane.

very cool alliteration but if you ask me she killed him on purpose which is ok no one liked two ton tony anyways

Interesting piece Debbie, i especially liked the word play in the title you created...

Lots of tees and dees, just lacks a few pees. Oh don't clobber me Deb! :)

Very cleverly done, my dear! Poor dangling Debbie!!! Blessings and Hugs, Keith

Tooth ache!!

Tooth ache!!

oh, and that's because there was no punctuation before it. hahaha (my argument for using punctuation at all times except to cause people to stumble!)

I stumbled a wee bit on the word did toward the end. Good entry, Debs.

Poor Tony, I can't help but feel sorry for the guy. Not sure why. Tony

my mouth is gibbering!.. re my poem for carol, palms is a metaphor for leaves.. and these leaves fall down in harmony like a float descending together in withering phases ( oh welll):) thanks for te comment!.. best of winning luck ..:)