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The Big Event

Dangling diligently daring Debbie’s duos tries
Testing twin trapezes two ton Tony dies
did dangling Debbie dilgently try?

Comments from audience upon recitation.
"Meow" "Purrrrrrrrrrrrr"

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 10/31/2011 11:47:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Gwendolen's "Big Kid Tongue Twister" contest Debbie. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 10/30/2011 10:34:00 AM Congrats on your "D" twister. BG Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 10/30/2011 7:40:00 AM Good one..Congrats..Sara Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 10/29/2011 7:53:00 PM Big twisting event Deb, Congrats on your win. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 10/29/2011 1:36:00 PM Congrats Debbie on a top ten sweet success with this great tongue twister luv.. any snow your way?? we have four inches already and counting..luv.. Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 10/29/2011 9:03:00 AM Dangling Debbie's kitty is the best critique' of poetry I've seen here! She (or he) should sponsor a contest!! Congrats to the both of you !! Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 10/29/2011 8:18:00 AM I pondered the answer to this tongue twisting caper...I think she let him fall on purpose!! ha ha. Congrats to you, Debbie, on your winning place in my contest. Always a pleasure to read your work! Love, OH, also....great that you have gotten your lil cat as an audience. :) Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 10/29/2011 7:40:00 AM Congratulations on the win in the contest of Gwen, Debbie Login to Reply

Robert Johnson Date: 10/25/2011 10:33:00 AM As Tony landed on his feet. He was so heavy they got stuck in the peat. These farmyard antics and traveling show's. Took their toll as they dug up his toes. Dangling Debbie just hung up above. Confused how she felt, devoid of love. No way to get down, they brought in a crane. Now Daring Debbie walks around half insane. Login to Reply

Nathan D. Date: 10/22/2011 9:55:00 AM very cool alliteration but if you ask me she killed him on purpose which is ok no one liked two ton tony anyways Login to Reply

Joe Maverick Date: 10/15/2011 1:00:00 PM Interesting piece Debbie, i especially liked the word play in the title you created... Login to Reply

Elizabeth Wesley Date: 10/14/2011 8:25:00 PM Lots of tees and dees, just lacks a few pees. Oh don't clobber me Deb! :) Login to Reply

Keith Bickerstaffe Date: 10/14/2011 7:53:00 PM Very cleverly done, my dear! Poor dangling Debbie!!! Blessings and Hugs, Keith Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 10/13/2011 2:04:00 PM Tooth ache!! Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 10/13/2011 2:03:00 PM Tooth ache!! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/13/2011 9:39:00 AM oh, and that's because there was no punctuation before it. hahaha (my argument for using punctuation at all times except to cause people to stumble!) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/13/2011 9:38:00 AM I stumbled a wee bit on the word did toward the end. Good entry, Debs. Login to Reply

Tony Lane Date: 10/12/2011 8:35:00 PM Poor Tony, I can't help but feel sorry for the guy. Not sure why. Tony Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 10/12/2011 5:24:00 PM my mouth is gibbering!.. re my poem for carol, palms is a metaphor for leaves.. and these leaves fall down in harmony like a float descending together in withering phases ( oh welll):) thanks for te comment!.. best of winning luck ..:) Login to Reply