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The Big Event

Dangling diligently daring Debbie’s duos tries Testing twin trapezes two ton Tony dies did dangling Debbie dilgently try? Comments from audience upon recitation. "Meow" "Purrrrrrrrrrrrr"

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/31/2011 11:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Gwendolen's "Big Kid Tongue Twister" contest Debbie. Love, Carol

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/30/2011 10:34:00 AM

Congrats on your "D" twister. BG

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/30/2011 7:40:00 AM

Good one..Congrats..Sara

John Freeman

Date: 10/29/2011 7:53:00 PM

Big twisting event Deb, Congrats on your win. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/29/2011 1:36:00 PM

Congrats Debbie on a top ten sweet success with this great tongue twister luv.. any snow your way?? we have four inches already and counting..luv..

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/29/2011 9:03:00 AM

Dangling Debbie's kitty is the best critique' of poetry I've seen here! She (or he) should sponsor a contest!! Congrats to the both of you !!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 10/29/2011 8:18:00 AM

I pondered the answer to this tongue twisting caper...I think she let him fall on purpose!! ha ha. Congrats to you, Debbie, on your winning place in my contest. Always a pleasure to read your work! Love, OH, also....great that you have gotten your lil cat as an audience. :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/29/2011 7:40:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of Gwen, Debbie

Robert Johnson

Date: 10/25/2011 10:33:00 AM

As Tony landed on his feet. He was so heavy they got stuck in the peat. These farmyard antics and traveling show's. Took their toll as they dug up his toes. Dangling Debbie just hung up above. Confused how she felt, devoid of love. No way to get down, they brought in a crane. Now Daring Debbie walks around half insane.

Nathan D.

Date: 10/22/2011 9:55:00 AM

very cool alliteration but if you ask me she killed him on purpose which is ok no one liked two ton tony anyways

Joe Maverick

Date: 10/15/2011 1:00:00 PM

Interesting piece Debbie, i especially liked the word play in the title you created...

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/14/2011 8:25:00 PM

Lots of tees and dees, just lacks a few pees. Oh don't clobber me Deb! :)

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 10/14/2011 7:53:00 PM

Very cleverly done, my dear! Poor dangling Debbie!!! Blessings and Hugs, Keith

Kash Poet

Date: 10/13/2011 2:04:00 PM

Tooth ache!!

Kash Poet

Date: 10/13/2011 2:03:00 PM

Tooth ache!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/13/2011 9:39:00 AM

oh, and that's because there was no punctuation before it. hahaha (my argument for using punctuation at all times except to cause people to stumble!)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/13/2011 9:38:00 AM

I stumbled a wee bit on the word did toward the end. Good entry, Debs.

Tony Lane

Date: 10/12/2011 8:35:00 PM

Poor Tony, I can't help but feel sorry for the guy. Not sure why. Tony

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/12/2011 5:24:00 PM

my mouth is gibbering!.. re my poem for carol, palms is a metaphor for leaves.. and these leaves fall down in harmony like a float descending together in withering phases ( oh welll):) thanks for te comment!.. best of winning luck ..:)