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The Best Thing In My World

The best thing in the world my love Is it the rainbow in the sky? Is it the birds that fly? Is it the waves in the sea? Is it the whistling trains running past the trees! Is it the elephants marching like on a ramp? Is it the rain drops that make us damp? Tell me is it the dipping Sun? Dear I saw it under the full lit Moon The best thing in your eyes Your smile makes my heart melt like ice In your love I go blind You are the best to happen in my world

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/9/2011 6:04:00 PM
We don't have elephants in North America, so you can't be describing a local scene. However, your work is decently descriptive.
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