The Best Thing In My World

The best thing in the world
my love
Is it the rainbow in the sky?
Is it the birds that fly?
Is it the waves in the sea?
Is it the whistling trains
running past the trees!
Is it the elephants 
marching like on a ramp?
Is it the rain drops
that make us damp?
Tell me is it the dipping Sun?
Dear I saw it under the full lit Moon
The best thing in your eyes
Your smile makes my heart
melt like ice
In your love I go blind
You are the best to happen
in my world
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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February 9, 2011 at 6:04 PM
We don't have elephants in North America, so you can't be describing a local scene. However, your work is decently descriptive.
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