The Best Gift On Valentine's Day

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Flowers are beautiful, to smell...to see And so are chocolates, so sweet...tasty But the best gift...that always charms Is to hold your loved one...in your arms Whisper softly...in their ear I love you forever, my love...my dear

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Line Gauthier

Date: 2/16/2019 11:27:00 AM

Lovely and romantic, Charles. So true.

Arturo Michael

Date: 2/16/2019 10:44:00 AM

Loverboy...you don't mince words...Nice flow too...All the best Charlie

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/16/2019 10:27:00 AM

You are right. This is a sweet poem. Well done :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/16/2019 9:51:00 AM

That truly is the best gift, Charles..better than flowers or chocolates. Sweet, romantic!

Silent One

Date: 2/16/2019 9:12:00 AM

Very sweet Charlie..

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/16/2019 8:54:00 AM

The best gifts are always the love gifts, Charles. "Loving someone forever" seems to be out of style, glad you still see the value in it my friend.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/16/2019 8:27:00 AM

Holidays do get commercialized sometimes and Valentine's Day is no exception, Charlie. What always mattered more to me was romance that represents a strong bond. Your poem is sweet, just like you. Great work, my friend.

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 2/16/2019 8:24:00 AM

True story. And on each and every day. Always and all ways ...