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The Beginning

You touched my mind long before I saw you I wandered in thoughts of you in dreams Dreams became moments of desire when your words opened up my world You touched my heart long before I met you I lost myself in your eyes, falling deep into the blue pools of your passion when your words beckoned me You touched my soul long before you touched me I surrendered myself to a heaven surreal in feelings you painted when your words enwrapped my heart.

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Michaela Dowdy

Date: 4/5/2010 7:48:00 AM

i love it. amazing write. Thank you for your comments(:

Daniel Cheeseman

Date: 3/21/2010 8:38:00 AM

Gulp ! what a lovely poem Alie, rich and inviting , thanks so much for your support Daniel

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/20/2010 5:59:00 PM

enjoyed reading!!! part of a poem I did---Swift, rushing, bubbling creek Flowing to the gulf, cycle of life Ebbing near with sounds of nature Check it out if you like:)