The Bee and Fly

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For contest 'Out on a Lin' sponsor Joseph May written 6/9/2025

Oh to live life busy as a bee Admiring flowers making honey Then the fly comes along Says the bee got it wrong A pile of poop is the place to be

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Beryl Edmonds

Date: 6/12/2025 2:03:00 PM

Good Lim Karen… Beryl

Karen Jones
Date: 6/12/2025 3:46:00 PM

Thanks!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/9/2025 11:47:00 PM

You nailed this one, Karen. Let me 'plop down' again and reread it. lol. ~ Furr T. Lizer

Karen Jones
Date: 6/10/2025 12:33:00 AM

lol hugs :0)

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 6/9/2025 8:49:00 PM

I love it. Now I realize why I like bees but not flies. Your limerick is a sucess.

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 6/9/2025 9:25:00 PM

Me too

Karen Jones
Date: 6/9/2025 9:05:00 PM

Thanks Hilda! I struggle with limericks.