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For contest 'Out on a Lin' sponsor Joseph May written 6/9/2025

Oh to live life busy as a bee Admiring flowers making honey Then the fly comes along Says the bee got it wrong A pile of poop is the place to be

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Jim Healey

Date: 6/15/2025 11:01:00 AM

Can't beat the crap out of this one! Ha! Congrats.

Karen Jones
Date: 6/15/2025 12:00:00 PM

Hahahaha! Thanks Jim!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/15/2025 10:14:00 AM

Ha! One insects crap is another's treasure. Congrats.

Karen Jones
Date: 6/15/2025 10:57:00 AM

Hahahaha good one! Thanks!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 6/15/2025 7:07:00 AM

Haha Karen. So witty! Congratulations! :)

Karen Jones
Date: 6/15/2025 7:45:00 AM

Thank you Linda!

Krishnanand Guptar

Date: 6/14/2025 8:15:00 AM

Congratulations Karen on your win in this contest with a pleasant flowing write. Wish ing you a cheerful weekend.

Karen Jones
Date: 6/14/2025 9:04:00 AM

Happy weekend and thanks!

Crystol Woods

Date: 6/14/2025 7:52:00 AM

Heehee...poop jokes are still funny! Good one Karen! Xo

Karen Jones
Date: 6/14/2025 9:03:00 AM

:0) Thanks

Joseph May

Date: 6/14/2025 7:35:00 AM

Haha, Very nicely penned Karen, Congrats on your win

Karen Jones
Date: 6/14/2025 7:37:00 AM

I am honored! Limerick’s are my weakness lol! But I love them!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/14/2025 7:32:00 AM

Good one, Karen! CONGRATS on your win!! Janice

Karen Jones
Date: 6/14/2025 7:36:00 AM

Thanks!

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 6/12/2025 2:03:00 PM

Good Lim Karen… Beryl

Karen Jones
Date: 6/12/2025 3:46:00 PM

Thanks!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/9/2025 11:47:00 PM

You nailed this one, Karen. Let me 'plop down' again and reread it. lol. ~ Furr T. Lizer

Karen Jones
Date: 6/10/2025 12:33:00 AM

lol hugs :0)

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 6/9/2025 8:49:00 PM

I love it. Now I realize why I like bees but not flies. Your limerick is a sucess.

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 6/9/2025 9:25:00 PM

Me too

Karen Jones
Date: 6/9/2025 9:05:00 PM

Thanks Hilda! I struggle with limericks.