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For contest 'Out on a Lin' sponsor Joseph May written 6/9/2025

The Bee and Fly

Oh to live life busy as a bee 
Admiring flowers making honey
Then the fly comes along
Says the bee got it wrong
A pile of poop is the place to be
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Healey Avatar
June 15, 2025 at 11:01 AM
Can't beat the crap out of this one! Ha! Congrats.
Jones Avatar
June 15, 2025 at 12:00 PM
Hahahaha! Thanks Jim!
Dietrich Avatar
June 15, 2025 at 10:14 AM
Ha! One insects crap is another's treasure. Congrats.
Jones Avatar
June 15, 2025 at 10:57 AM
Hahahaha good one! Thanks!
Fowler Avatar
June 15, 2025 at 7:07 AM
Haha Karen. So witty! Congratulations! :)
Jones Avatar
June 15, 2025 at 7:45 AM
Thank you Linda!
Guptar Avatar
June 14, 2025 at 8:15 AM
Congratulations Karen on your win in this contest with a pleasant flowing write. Wish ing you a cheerful weekend.
Jones Avatar
June 14, 2025 at 9:04 AM
Happy weekend and thanks!
Woods Avatar
June 14, 2025 at 7:52 AM
Heehee...poop jokes are still funny! Good one Karen! Xo
Jones Avatar
June 14, 2025 at 9:03 AM
:0) Thanks
May Avatar
June 14, 2025 at 7:35 AM
Haha, Very nicely penned Karen, Congrats on your win
Jones Avatar
June 14, 2025 at 7:37 AM
I am honored! Limerick’s are my weakness lol! But I love them!
Canerdy Avatar
June 14, 2025 at 7:32 AM
Good one, Karen! CONGRATS on your win!! Janice
Jones Avatar
June 14, 2025 at 7:36 AM
Thanks!
Edmonds  Avatar
June 12, 2025 at 2:03 PM
Good Lim Karen… Beryl
Jones Avatar
June 12, 2025 at 3:46 PM
Thanks!
Wolf Avatar
June 9, 2025 at 11:47 PM
You nailed this one, Karen. Let me 'plop down' again and reread it. lol. ~ Furr T. Lizer
Jones Avatar
June 10, 2025 at 12:33 AM
lol hugs :0)
Greenhough Avatar
June 9, 2025 at 8:49 PM
I love it. Now I realize why I like bees but not flies. Your limerick is a sucess.
Greenhough Avatar
June 9, 2025 at 9:25 PM
Me too
Jones Avatar
June 9, 2025 at 9:05 PM
Thanks Hilda! I struggle with limericks.
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