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The Beauty of Vesuvius

THE BEAUTY OF VESUVIUS An olive garland crowns her Autumn hair, The beauty of Vesuvius — she’s unaware. Although the redness of her parched eyes and the ashen peaks of her sculpted face prophecy with fidgety sighs. Her green and fiery crop intent to part this place. …but not like this, with incendiary clouds descending, plucking her garland and freezing the crowd. 5/3/2019 Julia Ward’s A Garland Poetry Contest

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Date: 5/8/2019 1:04:00 AM
Well worded all around, awesome kim, Aloha William...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/30/2019 6:49:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 5/6/2019 5:58:00 PM
Looking for a garland wreath for you, awarded in the Winner's Circle with this awesome write, Kim. Erupting with applause! :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/6/2019 9:33:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon! :)
Date: 5/5/2019 8:04:00 AM
My friend, your poetry always stirs this old poet's Heart and Mind.. A fav, this is a gleaming gem!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2019 9:53:00 PM
Thank you so much, Robert!
Date: 5/4/2019 6:53:00 PM
glorious personification with a greeat ending, kim... huggs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/4/2019 6:56:00 PM
Thank you, Nette! Hugs...Kim

Book: Shattered Sighs