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The Ocean

The vast beautiful ocean. Is constantly in motion. It gives the notion. That it exhibits emotion. Can calm like a mixed potion. And flow as smooth as lotion. Looked upon with devotion. The vast beautiful ocean.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/23/2020 3:45:00 PM

hello Sandra Weiss, the ocean is calming. So is the rivers and lakes. Calming for the soul. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/28/2020 4:19:00 PM

A jazzy monorhyme that made me smile and dance a bit.

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 2/29/2020 12:31:00 PM

I am picturing you dancing Caren. " you go girl"! Glad it made you smile.

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/28/2020 11:34:00 AM

Very nice Monorhyme Sandy. Calming too :)

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 2/29/2020 12:28:00 PM

Thank you Heidi. Calming is nice.

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/28/2020 11:26:00 AM

It is indeed most enchanting, Sandra. Nice monorhyme:)

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 2/29/2020 12:27:00 PM

Thank you Daniel.