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The Beast Within -Anacreontic Verse

With its eyes like cauldrons brimming with molten lava, It looks at me searing holes in my soul, Its tongue like a wild viper lashes out at me spewing poison, Its claws grip my frail heart in a grim vise, Its shadow falls across my life imbuing it with melancholy that I am not quite able to shrug off, Pushing me into an existential realm of despair, Triggering chaos, Eroding trust; My carnal cravings, like relentless waves lashing the shores, tear asunder my rocky resolve into soft sand.
~10/29/15 Anacreontic verse I contest by Edward Ebbs

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/21/2015 4:21:00 AM
Greetings Abdul. Congratulations on your intrigue-spiced verse and WIN! ;-)
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Date: 11/21/2015 1:15:00 PM
Thanks for spiced comments. It tastes better now!
Date: 11/20/2015 8:59:00 PM
Excellent imagery, Abdul! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 11/21/2015 1:14:00 PM
Thanks Kim.
Date: 11/20/2015 3:01:00 PM
Anacreontic verse a new adventure for most of us but this winner will stand forever!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 11/21/2015 1:14:00 PM
Thanks Sara, appreciate your comments very much.
Date: 11/19/2015 3:17:00 PM
many congrats Abdul:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/19/2015 7:58:00 AM
Interesting that almost all of the comments are from women. Well written, Abdul.
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Abdul Malik
Date: 11/19/2015 9:10:00 AM
Tell me about it! Probably they do like the beast within us. Thanks for your very insightful comments.
Date: 11/19/2015 6:47:00 AM
Congrats Abdul! Well deserved!
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Date: 11/19/2015 9:12:00 AM
Thanks Balveen.
Date: 11/19/2015 4:43:00 AM
Congrats on big win Abdul with this superb poem!!
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Abdul Malik
Date: 11/19/2015 9:13:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Upma.
Date: 11/19/2015 4:22:00 AM
Deep and intriguing but it wowed me! kudos!~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 11/19/2015 9:12:00 AM
Thanks for your deep comments. Got to go and subdue my beast now! lol.
Date: 11/19/2015 2:18:00 AM
wow, such depth, abdul... super congrats!..huggs
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Date: 11/19/2015 9:08:00 AM
Appreciate your comments very much, nette. Thanks.
Date: 11/18/2015 8:08:00 PM
Abdul, Congratulations in Edward Ebbs, AV1 Contest. HUGS **SKAT**
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Date: 11/18/2015 7:27:00 PM
Congratulations Abdul
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Abdul Malik
Date: 11/19/2015 9:08:00 AM
Thanks Nayda.
Date: 11/18/2015 6:16:00 PM
I am happy with all the enteries, congratulations on your well deserved win...thank you for participating!
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Date: 11/18/2015 6:48:00 PM
Thanks Edward. Appreciate very much.

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