The Beast Within

While the thick fog blankets the bright night sky A full moon illuminates my dark path Suddenly I'm crimped with horrific pains My heart starts to pump faster and faster Flesh begins tearing away from my bones All my bones breaking and growing larger Hair covers my body from head to toe I've lost total control of my mind now A strong desire for flesh consumes my thoughts Unaware of the beast I have become Visions come in and out, of empty streets, Knocking over trash cans and chasing cats Now glimpses of an old man and his dog Getting closer and closer, my heart stops Taking every step slower and slower Till I have found the right distance to pounce Reaching the mark my heart begins to race I jump at the man and my mind goes black Seeing clear now, I'm not in the same place My body naked and cold, drenched in sweat I look to my hands they're painted in blood Now panicking, wondering what happened Fearing now, the unknown reality Focusing on my current location I stumble to my feet, dizzy and sick And scurry through the dim morning sunlight Miles, later knowing now where I am Finding my home I entered in a haste To dreadfully wait and pray for the truth 6/24/2017

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Date: 6/25/2017 2:01:00 AM
I was going to say: White Wolf will like this, but I see he already does :) It's an exciting and scary tale, much different from what you normally write. Melikes.
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 6/25/2017 11:46:00 AM
Thanks, Darren I'm glad you liked it :)
Date: 6/24/2017 7:48:00 PM
They're painted in blood! This is not at all what I expected! I like it, nicely done
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 6/24/2017 7:57:00 PM
Thanks, figured I would give it a try
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