The Beast of Turtle Lake

A legend tells of a place I know 
    where people feared to tread.
And if they did, they often disappeared 
    and the Natives feared them dead.
The Cree tell stories in whispered tones 
    of a creature to forsake.
A Beast that preys on human flesh 
    and swims in Turtle Lake.

I had heard about the legend 
    and wondered if it's true?
And drove up early on a Friday 
    to see an Elder who I knew.
He told me of a story 
    when two men failed to take
The advice to leave the creature be 
    who swam in Turtle Lake.

'Dave Simmons was a Lawyer 
    and his friend was Richard Flake.
And fishing was their passion, 
    spending every weekend at the lake.
Their wives weren't very happy 
    to hear their brand new goal.
To try and catch the vile creature 
    who ate most people whole.'

The Elder said, 'They were quite concerned 
    on the beast they hoped to meet.
And who and what this creature was 
    that they intend to greet?
They were not sure but what they heard 
    had made their spirits soar.
If the truth be told... they had their hopes
     for a real Plesiosaur.'

'The weekend came as the men set out 
    upon the open road.
From Saskatoon, they soon arrived 
    to where the water flowed.
They would sleep the night, meet the sun 
    and hope the weather breaks.
For in the morning... they must be well prepared 
    to enter Turtle Lake.'

'The time had come and the crows were there 
    to gird their heads to wake.
Their mission clear... to catch the beast 
    who lived in Turtle Lake.
Breakfast had with their stomachs full,
    they gazed beyond the shore.
To catch a glimpse and hear the roar 
    of that fearsome dinosaur.'

'They took a boat with leather seats, 
    a truly cushy ride.
I quietly stared and shook my head 
    when they refused a guide.
The men set out and thought a bit 
    on the words that I had said.
As it was early dawn... the Beast was out 
    and needed to be fed.'

'They trolled the point at a snail's pace...
    they laid a chum of ham.
This didn't work, so they made a change 
    and tried a little lamb.
The Lake suddenly rose and the boat was swamped, 
    unsure what they had caught.
But it was huge and thus much too big 
    for all the net that they had bought.'

'Such a cost some men pay 
    when their talents they exceed.
To fake with pride and then succumb 
    to a creature who must feed.
But in the end... no man truly dies 
    if he leaves a cautious tale.
Because Life's a quest to find yourself 
    and follow Ahab's whale.'

'That's all I know,' the Elder said,
    'Of this sad affair.
When two friends, Dave and Richard 
    didn't have a prayer.
But to this day some people say 
    when on the lake at night.
The Beast is seen swimming near the shore 
    with two men hanging tight.'

Tales are told of these men 
    who tried to catch a dragon.
Having failed... it certainly had 
    the Locals tongues a waggin'.
But be aware... to those who plan
     to make the same mistake.
Don't try and catch the dreaded Beast 
    who swims in Turtle Lake.


              The End

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Date: 4/13/2019 12:20:00 PM
David I read your poems out loud so they become sing songie, and I follow every new reading for the next stanza until the end; then you make me think about the poem I've just read. Since university I've ceased to read but rather go back to my love of films; so when you said Ahab I saw then scene too well. Actor Peck's arm beckoning his men to give in. That film was of course in black and white; thusly so the yin and yang, but "white" had always been archetypally good. Your monster was white?
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David Mchattie
Date: 4/19/2019 3:13:00 PM
I watch a lot of old movies on Turner. I love films about good and evil. The 'The Oxbow Incident. and 'Twelve Angry Men.' would be two examples. Have a gret day.
Date: 4/5/2019 3:44:00 AM
am glad I am not on a raft on this lake. should be a sign at the gate.. "danger-no swimming' wonderful story and motion to feel oneself feeling the need for a bigger boat. !!
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David Mchattie
Date: 4/5/2019 10:28:00 AM
Some people claim it's a 300 pound sturgeon left from when the lake used to be connected to the Saskatchewan river,
Date: 4/2/2019 5:35:00 AM
I take it you are probably a lawyer by day? "There is no deed, no human plan, a Lawyer can't make worse." Ha! Another fun read; like a story, but in chanting, singing form.
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David Mchattie
Date: 4/3/2019 5:05:00 PM
No. I'm retired after 30 years in retail. Turtle Lake is another small town in Saskatchewan where monster sightings are common.
Date: 3/23/2019 7:44:00 PM
A compelling read. Nice rhythm throughout. Very much enjoyed
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