The Beast

The harshest lessons of the past teach—you need the beast.
The wilderness of future tells you to feed the beast.

Renounce the shackles pulling you down into the mud.
Be as the mud and thrive, embracing the greed, the beast.

Because the nature of the world is contempt; inspire, 
and revel in that fervid pit, they screech, “Bleed the beast!”

Granted, it's a lonely road of thorns and oozing wounds.
Life begins and ends in desolation, speed the beast.

That piece of earth you have sweat on is yours to lay claim.
Morality is contribution, don't cede the beast.

When love does come, remember not to squander the choice.
Rise to magnificence with one of your breed, the beast.

Fate may give comfort to those who seek, opines Tashir,
For harbingers of progress, self is the creed: The Beast.


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Form: While the form of the poem is ghazal, the theme of it is closer to that of didactic poetry.

Date: 20 / 11 / 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Murray Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 3:43 PM
I don't know ghazal, I only know what appeals to me. A most appealing poem. Well done Tamal.
Kundu Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 5:53 PM
Thank you, Jean!
Neumann Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 12:32 AM
Taming the beast. Congratulations, Kai
Kundu Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 12:40 AM
Thank you. :)
White Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 12:02 AM
I love the ghazal, I work with ancient arabic poetry, so I am familiar with the form. But your poem is simply wonderful! Congratulations.
White Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 1:46 AM
You're welcome :) It was well deserved!
Kundu Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 1:45 AM
Admittedly, I was quite tentative about using ghazal to structure this poem, but everything else kept not working. Interesting how things come together. Thanks for reading, Darren!
Bhurani Avatar
November 24, 2016 at 8:33 PM
Lovely ghazal..and fab vocab... I've attempted ghazal just once.....congratulations
Kundu Avatar
November 24, 2016 at 10:48 PM
Thank you, Rizwana!
Negron Flores Avatar
November 24, 2016 at 4:22 PM
Congratulations Tamal on the placement of the contest.
Kundu Avatar
November 24, 2016 at 6:35 PM
Thank you! And thank you for the contest, Nayda!
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