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"Peace comes not from the absence of conflict in life but from the ability to cope with it." Quotemaster.Org All people have experienced inner conflict, a struggle in the mind and battle with yourself; a dark shadow- a turmoil of head and heart, grappling and questioning to make any decisions. Your thinking is out of balance and not aligned, it is a negative energy that is heavy on your spirit; so emotional, so exhausting, and overwhelming, oh yes, I have questioned myself many times. I have been full of fear, worry, anxiety, frustration, that hindered any decisions be they simple or complex; hesitating about my moral and ethical expectations, trying to conform with relationships that were doomed. My self perception suffered and I was full of disgrace, questioning, what was my place and purpose; I just stopped sharing my religious and political views, and knew something had to change so I could move on. So, I started to acknowledge the conflicts, owning them, and in a detached way I weighted the pros and cons; realizing there was no escape but to face the inner conflicts, and I found a clarity, made a decision and had peace of mind. _____________________ August 16, 2022 Poetry/Verse/The Battle Within Copyright Protected, ID 08-1480-475-16 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Inner Conflict sponsor, Unseeking Seeker, Judged 08/20/2022 First Place

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Date: 8/24/2022 8:11:00 AM
Dear Constance. Your poem is what yearning and strength are about. It spoke to me, as I was angry at myself for allowing things to happen. I finally forgave myself. I'm so happy you have found peace, too.
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Date: 8/24/2022 1:42:00 PM
Ann, thank you so much for the compliment and comment~
Date: 8/22/2022 2:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write/picture. Have a great/blessed day writing away...................
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Date: 8/23/2022 3:08:00 PM
Paula, thank you for the congratulations and the compliment ~
Date: 8/21/2022 3:08:00 AM
So descriptive of how you dealt with your inner conflicts and how you found peace of mind dear Constance... Thank you for sharing this... Congratulations on your first place win... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 8/21/2022 4:10:00 PM
Ani, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and congratulations, hugs ~
Date: 8/20/2022 12:15:00 PM
love this deep & inspiring write, my friend. Thanks for the win in your contest - so glad you liked it. Hope all is well with you & that cute kitty x
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Date: 8/21/2022 4:11:00 PM
Jack, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem, and you are welcome on your win, excellent poem, we are both well, thank you ~
Date: 8/20/2022 12:21:00 AM
We are not Ostriches to bury our heads in the sand and if we have conflict or strife in our lives should deal with it immediately and not let it fester. I Like your approach Constance as I do much the same and i find that communication with someone can always help to first unburden yourself and then you can think more clearly. A sensible beautifully crafted, creative poem, well penned Constance. hugs, blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 8/21/2022 4:12:00 PM
Jennifer, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and congratulations, hugs and blessings ~
Date: 8/19/2022 12:30:00 PM
Very nice, Dear Heart. You found how to handle them, and that is the key. To deal with them the best you can. Great idea for the contest!
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Date: 8/21/2022 4:12:00 PM
Andrea, thank you so much for the compliment and comment ~
Date: 8/17/2022 10:04:00 PM
So glad to know how you encountered your inner conflicts and finally found inner peace ! Everyone experiences such conflicts. But sad, some succumb to them. So beautifully written ! Everyone can relate to this ! Wish you, dear Constance, all the Best in the contest!
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Date: 8/18/2022 9:20:00 AM
Valsa, thank you so much for the comment, and compliment and encouragement ~
Date: 8/17/2022 7:43:00 PM
Crafted wonderfully well to highlight the hardships that we go through with our own internal torment. Excellent contribution, Constance. Best wishes for the contest. Appreciate your comment on my page. Best regards and hugs
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Date: 8/18/2022 9:21:00 AM
Sotto, thank you so much for the great compliment and encouragement ~
Date: 8/17/2022 11:36:00 AM
Nice write! Enjoyed! Aloha!
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Date: 8/17/2022 3:16:00 PM
Rico, thank you so much for the compliment, Aloha ~Constance
Date: 8/17/2022 10:14:00 AM
The complexity of our humanity is a very Intriguing field Constance, and some things That cause us the greatest disquiet, are but A jot to others.. I would think many here have Wrestled with things at times, Life though Small in reality, is more than a sentence For some.) you may have noticed I dropped a Piece into your contest, as I said, I think I Surprised myself there' I hope you are well.?
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Date: 8/17/2022 3:18:00 PM
Joe, thank you so much for the visit and comment, happy you entered my contest ~
Date: 8/16/2022 7:14:00 PM
Your emotions are so much like mine. Love the watercolor picture. Blessings my friend.
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Date: 8/17/2022 3:18:00 PM
Eve, thank you so much for the comment, and compliment, blessings ~
Date: 8/16/2022 11:48:00 AM
Exceptionally well written to cover the battles we face with inner turmoil. Great entry, Constance.
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Date: 8/16/2022 11:55:00 AM
Jenna, thank you so much for the compliment, and encouragement, blessings ~Constance

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