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The Bather

Tiger baths his wounds Cold water soothes like medicine He will fight again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/6/2012 5:13:00 AM
The second word in your first line should be "bathes". In this case, you want the verb instead of the noun. Good senryu.
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Date: 10/3/2012 10:32:00 AM
nice poem Cynthia..nice senryu :) thanks for sharing. Good day
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