The Bather

Tiger baths his wounds
Cold water soothes like medicine
He will fight again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Pettit Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 5:13 AM
The second word in your first line should be "bathes". In this case, you want the verb instead of the noun. Good senryu.
Liwayway Avatar
October 3, 2012 at 10:32 AM
nice poem Cynthia..nice senryu :) thanks for sharing. Good day
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