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The Bare Trees

All the leaves have turned To different colours Then when that was done The leaves start to fall Covering the ground Then the trees are bare One gust of wind blows They will all shiver Until the snow falls Coating the boughs white

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Ricky Muse

Date: 1/21/2018 7:34:00 AM

Imagism. Very nice!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/5/2018 10:12:00 AM

Hello Richard, so nice to see you. Thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.

Beejadhur Sewumber

Date: 1/8/2018 10:00:00 AM

I love the words you've chosen. Great write. Nature plays its part.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/8/2018 12:42:00 PM

Hello My friend,I hope all is well with you.Happy New Year. Thank you for the lovely comment.I like to write about nature. Have a nice day my friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/7/2018 3:15:00 PM

- Winter is here ... cold, long and dark - A great poem, Darlene - Happy New Year ! :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/8/2018 8:05:00 AM

Hello Sunshine Smile,it is cold here as well we are having a colder winter this year. Freezing winds cold freezing days. Happy New Year. Hugs Darlene. Have a nice day my friend.

Carole Duet

Date: 1/6/2018 11:16:00 PM

Returning home I found different colors of leaves covering the ground....yes, I love Fall and it looks like you do too, Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/7/2018 10:37:00 AM

Hello Carole,yes i like Fall,I like the coloured leaves. What I do not like is raking the leaves. Have a nice day my friend.

Milton Robertson

Date: 1/6/2018 10:09:00 PM

Thank you for commenting on my poem. Darlene. Lovely poem. Well, first they'll shiver then quite, not a peep, when they go into a deep sleep.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/7/2018 10:41:00 AM

Hello Milton,thank you.you are right they will go into a deep sleep. . I like your poetry. Have a nice day my friend.

Joseph May

Date: 1/6/2018 7:18:00 PM

Nicely penned Darlene..

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/7/2018 10:54:00 AM

Thank you for your lovely comment. I enjoy your poetry. Have a nice day my friend.

Akkina Downing

Date: 1/5/2018 8:47:00 PM

They stood bare for months praying... nice one Darlene! Hugs and smiles :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/6/2018 11:47:00 AM

Hello Akkina nice to meet you.Yes the bare trees prayed for a coating of snow to keep them warm. Have a nice day my friend.

Arturo Michael

Date: 1/5/2018 6:29:00 PM

tree hands covered in white gloves...All the best to you Darlene...Happy New Year

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/6/2018 11:57:00 AM

Hello Micheal, yes the trees do have hands, they need the snow to keep them warm.Thank you for your comment my friend. have a nice day.