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Our son's graduation, West Point Military Academy, May 1981

The Band Concert


The Band Concert

It was not a typical musical concert on an indoor stage,
but a marching band concert—and a very special one to me.
I sat with family on bleachers that sunny day as
the glorious band’s thunderous sounds filled my ears,
and my chest vibrated wildly with the powerful music
from brass, woodwinds, percussion, and resounding drums.

As my heart beat in sync with the strong pounding rhythm,
such deep patriotic emotion fully engulfed me, and I
could feel my heart fill up with pride as it beat with
the thrill of that music and with the vision of those great
young men and women in huge formations, marching
on their way to receive diplomas and off to serve our country.

Then I saw him, our dear son, marching within that "Long Gray Line",
stepping in unison with fellow classmates to that awesome music.
The wondrous relentless rhythm from those drums and horns,
together with the artistic and intricate merging formations, 
engulfed my whole being as tears filled my eyes with pride and joy—
on that special day—at that one-time special event—in May 1981...


Sandra M. Haight

~2nd Place~
Contest: Any Poem Written in 2015
Sponsor: Laura Loo
Judged: 07/16/2016

~Honorable Mention~
Contest: The Concert
Sponsor: Craig Cornish
Judged: 06/10/2015
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Merryman Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 5:57 PM
A great descriptive write, Sandra! Congrats on your win! Blessings!
Devnath  Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 4:43 PM
Beautiful poem my lovely smiling friend. Congrats on your beautiful win. A 7. Loved always, bl
Callus Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 3:59 PM
Time flies by so swiftly, but lovely memories like this one will never fade, Sandra! I love bands, and you gave life to yours; understandably proud of this special moment! Congratulations on this high flying winner! Regards // paul
Scars Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 2:08 PM
Sandra, you always bring out the best in different circumstances. This was not only creatively written but very informative lady...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
Haight Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 2:16 PM
Thank you so much, Luloo, for my nice placement. It was nice for me to bring this poem forth again in honor of our son and what a special day that was...35 years ago! He retired from the Army five years ago. Hugs, Sandra
A  Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 4:06 PM
sweet win
Wigley Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 11:43 PM
How lovely, Sandra, to be able to convey such a grand event and then focus down on to one individual, so small in the scheme of things that day yet the largest thing in your heart. A Mother's pride, louder than any drum. Congratulations on your win. Viv x
Stoner Jr Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 2:27 PM
congratulations Sandra on your winning concert write :o)
Haight Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 5:29 PM
Thank you, Robert! Both our poems were military service related! Thank you for stopping by! Sandra
Allison Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 1:59 PM
I am 100% sure I commented on this before Sandra - have had this happen a few times recently where comments disappear:-( I loved your unique take on the theme - cant imagine a memorable event than watching your son - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 2:06 PM
Thank you, Jan! Yes, definitely a memorable event as our son graduated West Point in 1981! Thanks for the nice comment and congrats! Hugs, Sandra
Austin Avatar
June 1, 2015 at 2:04 PM
Love your enthusiasm - the bass drum pounding in one's chest. I directed bands and orchestras since 1952. Retired now for many years. Love, daver
Haight Avatar
June 1, 2015 at 6:54 PM
So glad you liked it, Daver. It was such a memorable event! I appreciate your visit and nice comment! Hugs, Sandra
La France Avatar
May 31, 2015 at 5:26 PM
Sandra, I love how you wrote this poem for the contest, it is full of pride and love and an awesome write and thanks for visiting my poem, The Special Gift
Haight Avatar
June 1, 2015 at 6:52 PM
Thank you so much, Broken. It was such a memorable event in my life! I appreciate your kind words of support. Hugs, Sandra
A  Avatar
May 31, 2015 at 8:14 AM
Sandra, I know you are proud. Thank you for sharing your sons moment withus.
Haight Avatar
June 1, 2015 at 6:51 PM
Hi Skat, thank you so much for stopping by to read this poem and for your lovely comment. Hugs, Sandra
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