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The Autumn Leaves

The Autumn leaves me here to ~ fall ~ — my crutches that begin firstly where the tremors ripe from fire drawl the Autumn leaves the season's on girl's skin timely — ~ leaves~: her heart a maybe for all burning coldly, coldly burning — trees without leaves are not as tall, I never wanted my deluge. within the gold and the red scrawl, the Autumn leaves

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Brandy Nicole

Date: 8/13/2025 2:04:00 PM

' The Autumn leaves me here to ~ fall ~ ' Very clever, Paige. Sometimes the season leaves a cool touch on girl's skin. Many wonderful blessings to you, my dear sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/13/2025 5:18:00 AM

Reminds me of the famous song. Your poem pleases me.

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/11/2025 3:02:00 AM

Paige, this poem carries an ominous, melodious cadence that lingers in the air. The echo of “the Autumn leaves” develops gracefully, serving equally as a vivid picture and an ambient refrain of parting.

John Fleming

Date: 8/11/2025 2:02:00 AM

Very good, Paige. Very, very good to be more exact. Really enjoyed! :) john

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/10/2025 10:08:00 PM

Love the word play in line 1 and the contrast of coldly burning!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/10/2025 8:45:00 PM

Autumn leaves - fire drawl, gold & red scrawl …trees without leaves are not as tall - intriguing line. Hugs ~ Kim

Rowena Velasco

Date: 8/10/2025 8:17:00 PM

Paige, this poem has such a haunting, lyrical rhythm. The repetition of “the Autumn leaves” works beautifully as both an image and a quiet refrain of departure. I love the contrast in “burning coldly, coldly burning”—it captures the bittersweet pull of the season perfectly.