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The Astronaut - Anacreontic Verse

An alien lost, upon a planet in distant space, while hunkered down within a cave, tightly encased by coriaceous materials splashed with wear and cross-stitched red, feels the presence of five damp probes, slick and chalky, fragranced in musk and saltwater, slowly closing around his body applying pressure direct to the seams of his airtight suit. At Minute Maid Park, in Houston, Texas, Dallas Keuchel reaches into his fielder’s glove and prepares to pitch a baseball. 8/15/2016 Submitted for: Anacreontic Verse 4 Sponsored by: Edward Ebbs

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Date: 9/29/2016 9:21:00 PM
how on earth did I miss this one too! I am so mad at myself right now! I love this :) congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 8/24/2016 7:26:00 AM
What incredibly imagery Phillip - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/18/2016 9:49:00 PM
:) Love it!
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Phillip Garcia
Date: 8/18/2016 9:50:00 PM
Thanks Joe. Not quite as deep as yours but it was a fun write.
Date: 8/15/2016 7:59:00 AM
Vast space inside a small space. Love it.
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Phillip Garcia
Date: 8/15/2016 8:25:00 AM
It gave me a vast ache inside the empty space where my brain should be to write! So I'm pleased you enjoyed. Thank you!

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