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The Asp

Beware the perils of the golden asp whose world is of dust and death he moves as smoothly as satin and is as deadly as anthrax. How he writhes upon his belly intent on catching his victim ever searching, ever hunting preditory, with pure blood lust. In the apex of a dark night that is blacker than India ink the asp spies his helpless prey with distant, unblinking eyes. How he hisses, a heathen sound then flares his upturned nostrils how he flits his forked tongue about. Sharp fangs boldly appear from his scaly, snake mouth then suddenly, the asp leaps striking with prodigious precision paralyzing his prey. How quickly he hastens its demise ushering his catch through death’s distant door. Oh, beware the perils of the golden asp! Written on 5/2/2018

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Date: 5/8/2018 5:06:00 PM
Back to congratulate you! Well done. :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/8/2018 7:10:00 PM
Thanks, Susan :)
Date: 5/8/2018 8:37:00 AM
Very well-written and foreboding, Laura. I enjoyed your take on the theme and congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/8/2018 7:10:00 PM
Thanks, Sandra :)
Date: 5/7/2018 11:28:00 PM
Excellent, Laura, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/7/2018 8:15:00 PM
Great rhythm. Congrats on your win, Laura.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/7/2018 8:41:00 PM
Thank you, Line. :)
Date: 5/7/2018 7:49:00 PM
You capture the movement and the nuances of the golden asp! Congrats, Laura! Great!
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Date: 5/3/2018 2:20:00 AM
Way too much info for me lol. Just teasing... a very informative well-written poem on asps. Good luck in contest :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/3/2018 12:27:00 PM
I know, huh?! Thanks for commenting, Susan :)
Date: 5/2/2018 8:37:00 PM
I'm reading this standing on a chair, Laura. Good luck in the contest. Viv x
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/3/2018 12:26:00 PM
Thanks, Viv :)

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