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The Artist's Way

THE ARTIST’S WAY “I’ve penciled you in” Said he, with romantic eyes. “Me too!” She says, leaning in. His artist hand Scribbles her a shade of passion purple Her pony tail slender down her back Her hand, likewise, scribbles passion red, A masculine man With intense stare The pencils slide to the side ~ As they embrace ~ Forming a heart Which none can erase Kim Rodrigues © 2017

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Date: 3/25/2017 12:03:00 PM
beautiful write Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/25/2017 6:48:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph!
Date: 3/25/2017 11:38:00 AM
Ah so sweet....
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/25/2017 6:48:00 PM
Thank you, Paulette!
Date: 3/25/2017 9:56:00 AM
You present such a lovely, cute, romantic picture, Kim! I <3 it. Regards // paul
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/25/2017 6:47:00 PM
Thanks so much, Paul!
Date: 3/25/2017 1:23:00 AM
I love the imagery, Kim! Well done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/25/2017 7:24:00 AM
Thank you, White Wolf!
Date: 3/24/2017 6:53:00 PM
This is so sweet. I really enjoyed it.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/24/2017 7:07:00 PM
Thank you, Sunlite!
Date: 3/24/2017 6:45:00 PM
lovely little free verse here (no need for a comma between said and he) i'd love to see something like this in a contest of mine...you have a quirky, distinctive style
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/24/2017 7:08:00 PM
Thanks so much, Charlotte!
Date: 3/24/2017 6:39:00 PM
Oh Kim, this really made me smile. : ) A facile and natural write, so good to read.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/24/2017 7:08:00 PM
Thanks so much!

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