The Artist's Way

THE ARTIST’S WAY

“I’ve penciled you in”
Said he,  with romantic eyes.

“Me too!” 
She says, leaning in.

His artist hand
Scribbles her a shade of passion purple
Her pony tail slender down her back

Her hand, likewise, scribbles passion red,
A masculine man
With intense stare

The pencils slide to the side
~ As they embrace ~
 Forming a heart 
Which none can erase

Kim Rodrigues © 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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May Avatar
March 25, 2017 at 12:03 PM
beautiful write Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
March 25, 2017 at 6:48 PM
Thank you, Joseph!
Calasibetta Avatar
March 25, 2017 at 11:38 AM
Ah so sweet....
Rodrigues Avatar
March 25, 2017 at 6:48 PM
Thank you, Paulette!
Callus Avatar
March 25, 2017 at 9:56 AM
You present such a lovely, cute, romantic picture, Kim! I <3 it. Regards // paul
Rodrigues Avatar
March 25, 2017 at 6:47 PM
Thanks so much, Paul!
Wolf Avatar
March 25, 2017 at 1:23 AM
I love the imagery, Kim! Well done.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 25, 2017 at 7:24 AM
Thank you, White Wolf!
Wanter Avatar
March 24, 2017 at 6:53 PM
This is so sweet. I really enjoyed it.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 24, 2017 at 7:07 PM
Thank you, Sunlite!
Puddifoot Avatar
March 24, 2017 at 6:45 PM
lovely little free verse here (no need for a comma between said and he) i'd love to see something like this in a contest of mine...you have a quirky, distinctive style
Rodrigues Avatar
March 24, 2017 at 7:08 PM
Thanks so much, Charlotte!
Vinson Avatar
March 24, 2017 at 6:39 PM
Oh Kim, this really made me smile. : ) A facile and natural write, so good to read.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 24, 2017 at 7:08 PM
Thanks so much!
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