The Art of Restraint

Wide-eyed and nerves clenching,
I await the vacancy that fills the page
As eraser smudges and blackened lead
Sear through stanzas left for dead

Leering on the verge of lines,
I hear the symphony come to a halt
Captive sounds unravel the thread
Burst at the seams like words unread 

Jaw-slacked and brows upturned,
I fathom the launch of syllables
Drifting from my tongue to label
Sights and sounds recounted as tale  

Calm despite gut-wrenching,
I watch the drumming of my fingertips
Fall into silence on the kitchen table
Like wounded soldiers, weapons disabled
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Agustin Avatar
April 14, 2026 at 3:54 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 12, 2016 at 9:55 AM
Kim, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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July 21, 2015 at 4:11 PM
KIM, Stopped by to say hello, I enjoyed reading your poem today. FOREVER <3 SKAT"
Brown Avatar
January 3, 2012 at 8:11 AM
Congrats on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best Kim. Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
December 30, 2011 at 1:29 PM
Yes a most excellent description of the sometimes torture of writing I too posted one today discribing my museless morn! Congrad's Light & Love
Matthews Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 12:15 PM
Wonerful writing, the descriptions are unique and vivid and I enjoy the dark twists in it as most of my writing has, congradulations on making it through round one, Mark
Brown Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 9:39 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Kim. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
George   Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 3:37 AM
Superb writing, Kim. Congratulations on making it through the first round and best wishes on making it to the Finals. Lainie
Brown Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 6:12 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Kim. Love, Carol
Brown Avatar
March 14, 2011 at 11:26 AM
After a very super weekend I am back at the soup reading. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Kim. There are so many diverse writers here and I am so happy I am able to read most of them. Have a wonderful week and may you find what you are looking for in life and in your writing. Love, Carol
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