The Art of Dying Gracefully

THE ART OF DYING GRACEFULLY


As the family gathered around his bed
His eyes were rolled back in his head
They waited as he gasped for breath
Moments before he'd meet with death

They spoke briefly in quiet tones
Some even stifled sorrowful moans
His body shuddered, his eyelids closed
It looked as though he peacefully dozed

The pastor knelt by the bed to pray
When suddenly they heard the sick man say
I guess I put on quite a show
But I am just not ready to go

Contest - Burlesque Twist 
By: Natalie Flikkema
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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King Avatar
September 5, 2011 at 12:42 PM
ha, that is funny
The Rogue Rhymer Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 4:53 PM
Sorry for the delay-Thanks so much for entering my contest-and a big congrats. to you :)
Brown Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 3:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Natalie's "Burlesque Twist" contest Curtis. Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 7:25 PM
hmmmm not a nice man! Finnegan's Wake is a favorite song of mine! congrad's light & Love
Lane Avatar
August 18, 2011 at 8:57 PM
Very good. Very good. Tony
Williams Avatar
August 18, 2011 at 2:53 AM
hey Curtis congrats on your win David
Johnson Avatar
August 18, 2011 at 1:02 AM
Good ending. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
August 17, 2011 at 10:40 PM
Congrats Curtis on your super second place win my friend.. terrific piece luv..
Jones Avatar
August 17, 2011 at 9:27 PM
nice twist!
Baity Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 11:18 PM
Curitis this really read like a winner!!!!! This is really witty, such a clever write.... best of luck in the contest.....smiles.....chiquita
Wesley Avatar
August 12, 2011 at 11:45 AM
Oh Curtis. I was prepared for expitation and you brought him back to life in such style. Loved this crazy verse. You did a good job on it. Sound like a winner - good luck!
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