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The Arrow

The arrow pierced his armour causing an open painful wound he had thought there would be glamour He lay waiting feeling amour as he saw a woman gowned The arrow pierced his armour His wound she did kindly cover to her spirit he's attuned he had thought there would be glamour she poured into it liquor which stung making it burn and pound the arrow pierced his armour It was now letting out odour she made sure it was tightly bound He had thought there would be glamour At his grave a single mourner her tears were falling without sound the arrow pierced his armour No glory here just some clamour dead he lay no longer earthbound The arrow pierced his armour he had thought there would be glamour sadly many young men think war glamorous until they face the battlefield soon to learn there is none just pain, suffering and death.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/27/2014 10:44:00 AM
I think you should have written glory instead of glamour. I used to do archery and appreciated your writing about it . Peace and love Matthew Anish
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Date: 1/27/2014 11:17:00 AM
no can do Matthew it would interfere with the rhyme. I do agree that it glory is a better word in this context but it does not rhyme with armour. glad you enjoyed Shadow x smile hug
Date: 1/25/2014 4:02:00 PM
women dawn bathing suits and men dawn weapons. while women wear those bathing suits they need men to protect there melons.
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Date: 1/25/2014 5:17:00 PM
lmao John very true ty Shadow x smile hug
Date: 1/25/2014 3:14:00 PM
Hi Linda, A poignant but well crafted write..Hope all is well with you..
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Date: 1/25/2014 5:18:00 PM
ty Ken yes all is well Shadow x smile hug
Date: 1/25/2014 1:16:00 PM
A heartfelt write Shadow....sad but true
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Date: 1/25/2014 10:53:00 AM
Yes war is hell...This piece is wonderful.....Tim
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Date: 1/25/2014 11:00:00 AM
ty Tim pleased you enjoyed it Shadow x smile hug

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