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The Archer Shape

x x x x x x ~~~~ x x &~~~~~~~ x x The archer x x (stood very x xx still by the x xx oceans x xx edge His target was a buoy, tossed far ==================> from his ledge Aiming high against the sky he xx let his arrow go Ele- xx ments unforgiving x xx bounced the buoy x xx to and fro The x x archer through x x experience had ad- x x justed aim In account x x the wind and waves x he aspired to tame Al- x though the arrow mis- sed its mark, it was quite (\_/) close Few could call (-.-) that chosen path that he would diagnose In (“)(“) life the ones who love you, can help form a plan About the wind and waves, and where you might land What you might encounter I don't pretend to know But with a plan you just might land where you want to go!

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Date: 9/24/2019 3:14:00 PM
Loved tihs illustration, and I, too, adore the little bunny :) It's all in the planning ~ without it, we won't get too far, I suppose... It helps to have loved ones to help guide and provide a soft place to land. Best to you, pat <3
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Pat Adams
Date: 9/24/2019 6:27:00 PM
Thanks Hello. Life doesn't always go as planned but I believe we end up where we should!.......80)
Date: 1/27/2019 6:34:00 PM
G'day Pat … certainly very creative. Makes it hard to concentrate on your verse at first, but once in the swing of it, your poem reads a ripper - well done Pat - Lindsay
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Date: 1/27/2019 10:51:00 PM
Reads a ripper sounds...........ummm...pretty good I guess. OK, I guess that's a complement, so thank you very much Lindsay!........80)
Date: 1/20/2019 11:16:00 PM
Spectacular! And that bunny! :)))
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Pat Adams
Date: 1/21/2019 3:30:00 PM
Thanks Maureen!...I thought it came out pretty good.....80)
Date: 1/20/2019 6:35:00 PM
Wowsa, Pat!!! Amazing and the little bunny below is spectacular. Bravo!!
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Date: 1/21/2019 3:30:00 PM
Yeah, I thought that bunny was cute. I can't remember where I first saw it........80)
Date: 1/20/2019 6:23:00 PM
Ingenious, Pat.
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Pat Adams
Date: 1/21/2019 3:29:00 PM
Thanks Sunlite!

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