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The Archer

SONNET IN THE WIND (The Archer) Hark! What wind doth blow in yonder forest Stirring the spirit of a long dead archer In his endless search for the unwary doe He stealthily lifts his bow – aiming hurriedly His shot misses – his prey flees – frightened Alas! He trudges onward – eyes peering intently A huge buck with antlers like a tree Suddenly looms on the horizon He sniffs – testing the wind for signs Is danger lurking near The twang of the bowstring alerts his keen senses He pivots swiftly – his white tail flashing He bounds away – snorting contemptuously The archer – stirred by the wind – is seeking still God, in His infinite wisdom gave animals instinct Given also to man, but man fails to embrace it

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/18/2017 12:14:00 PM
Wonderful pen Curtis! Is this for the contest? If not it should :) xomo!
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 10/18/2017 12:18:00 PM
Thanks, Maureen for your kind remarks. Yes, I submitted it for the contest and added the final two lines as suggested to give it a sonnet with a twist. I appreciate your response. It really means a lot!

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