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The Archer

SONNET IN THE WIND (The Archer) Hark! What wind doth blow in yonder forest Stirring the spirit of a long dead archer In his endless search for the unwary doe He stealthily lifts his bow – aiming hurriedly His shot misses – his prey flees – frightened Alas! He trudges onward – eyes peering intently A huge buck with antlers like a tree Suddenly looms on the horizon He sniffs – testing the wind for signs Is danger lurking near The twang of the bowstring alerts his keen senses He pivots swiftly – his white tail flashing He bounds away – snorting contemptuously The archer – stirred by the wind – is seeking still

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Date: 9/17/2013 4:38:00 PM
If a hunter comes home carrying mushrooms- you do not ask him how the hunting went!
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Date: 9/16/2013 1:52:00 PM
I like it very much. The last sentence really makes the wind come into play for the title of it. It's a non traditional sonnet in that it is not rhyming, so I am not sure if the judge needs it rhymed or not. anyway, thanks for letting me know it was here, Curtis.
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