Notes About The Poem

The Anthropomorphic Cabinet, 1936 by Salvador Dali

I speak to the skylights
          of your tender soul
in formless forms
    in eccentric accents
aching in aloneness...
when tragedies of footprints
   remain a sculptured secret ~
like an untitled nightfall
dressed in denied definitions

avoiding the touch 
of perception 
   for mindfulness mirrors
memories I hoard
within titanium trays 
of masked melancholy…

but I long for you to wear
chronicles carved within
    my cold conscience ~ 
a universe layered
with moulded memoirs 

tell me how it feels
to be a beautiful burden
to the jinxed jewels
feasting upon 
scrutinized skin of silence 
   skeletons of psyche ~
too complex 
      for concave light...

  let me stay ~ stretched
in the still solitary sketch
          of surrealism ...
I am not a vision
     of gold and glitter
that wicked weavers
can materialize
but an unnamed sight ~ 
a breathing mystery 
the eyes of unfelt dusk
      fail to stroll through…

         intoxicated on pain
 ~ an ecstasy etched through angst ~
    to never be tamed 
                   to never be told
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Buhagiar Avatar
June 10, 2026 at 3:23 AM
What a structure. Leaves me breathless. You did very well.
Bordner Avatar
June 3, 2026 at 1:52 PM
Breathtaking...through the moralitybof your poetry you can turn a tragedy into a treasure...You are very gifted Poetess. This is another FAV!!...J.A.B.
DiMino Avatar
June 3, 2026 at 8:30 AM
"remain a sculptured secret ~ like an untitled nightfall dressed in denied definitions" -- Wow! Great stuff. "I am not a vision of gold and glitter that wicked weavers can materialize" -- Truly original. Wonderful imagery. Very rewarding read. Thank you. Like yourself, I also think Dali was saying here that we are all programmed by just physically being from the start, days numbered, aware senses to most of us seeming limited. At least one final outcome totally predetermined -- trapped. A complex wonderful artist.
Miller Avatar
June 3, 2026 at 2:59 AM
Another brilliant masterpiece, love it, love Dali
Empress Avatar
June 3, 2026 at 6:29 AM
Always appreciate your kindness dear Terry. Thank you so much for your comment, sending you light, always
Dietrich Avatar
June 3, 2026 at 12:54 AM
Right back with congrats!
Cunningham Avatar
June 3, 2026 at 12:44 AM
Another great interpretation of one of the great artists paintings IE. I appreciate great art but you always go in deeper to the heart and soul of it. I love his paintings especially the one with the clock bent over. Tom
Dietrich Avatar
June 3, 2026 at 12:03 AM
You pick such unique pieces of art to express your feelings about. I really wish I knew how to do this form. This is sure to be a winner
George Avatar
June 2, 2026 at 11:45 PM
" ~ an ecstasy etched through angst ~ to never be tamed to never be told"- This, I feel is the highlight of the poem. No doubt, you are a level above ordinary poets. I feel Ekphrasis is your forte. You have added layers of meaning and depth to the already complicated painting that belongs to the surrealistic realm. An added feather on your cap, sweet Empress!
Kendrick Avatar
June 2, 2026 at 5:16 PM
A kind of dark work by this artist and it makes me wonder what kind of person would do that work. Creative ekphrasis by you, IE. Way to go. Sara K.
Goldsmith Avatar
June 2, 2026 at 11:31 AM
Your words have brought the picture to life. Love Both..... Great Ending... Have a Lovely/Blessed Day Writing Away............
Liguori Avatar
June 2, 2026 at 11:25 AM
‘to the jinxed jewels feasting upon scrutinized skin of silence skeletons of psyche’… this is beautiful! Another masterpiece to add to your collection.
Empress Avatar
June 2, 2026 at 12:02 PM
I would like to write a master-mess for your contest too dear Robert, still doing research on the character. Quite interesting. Thank you for your support! Sending you light always
G  Avatar
June 2, 2026 at 10:32 AM
It's impossible to not be drawn in and fascinated by Dali art! He was so intensely interested in psychology, religion, physics, maths etc. so there is always layer upon layer of meaning. You have written with such depth and meaning creating a fascinating inside a psyche view - utterly fabulous! I love your use of "skylights" so infrequently used in poetry but totally poetic when used with skill! Many fabulous word pairings as always weaving magic - fave!
Empress Avatar
June 2, 2026 at 10:50 AM
Im overwhelmed with gratitude by your intellectual and well informed response on art and Dali! Yes thats right but nothing would beat his “ P “ art that you wrote on lolol! That was beyond layers! Hah! Imagine posting it here on soup! Thank you! Im always so pleased when the queen of ekphrasis appreciates one of my ekphrasis! I love dali! And Im planning on painting tmrw! For Saras brthday! Finally! Been months. Sending you light always (shooting star emoji) lol
Lane Avatar
June 2, 2026 at 9:48 AM
Since you are rallying in your love for Dali, I have a word or two for your portrayal of his painting. His creation of this surrealistic figure made my thoughts scream... "Unchain my heart!" But your emotional lines expressed the pain as "an ecstasy etched through angst." I wonder at his reasoning for painting such a scene, but then it's Dali, so mine is not to reason why.
Empress Avatar
June 2, 2026 at 10:07 AM
" unchain my heart" that should be a prompt linnersz! How inspiring, Dali was i believe inspired by psychology and the subconscious mind and so much more, read a little on this art sculpture...drawers etc holds so much of what human-beings suppress, repress or carry within, i find it a bit sensuous, but took a psychological approach. Hah. Thank you so much for being supportive, appreciate your presence. Sending you light, always
Onpaper Avatar
June 2, 2026 at 9:26 AM
Mmmmm I love this piece my Dali!!! It’s such a magnetic piece of art in every form!!! Now … to you papiiiii!!! skylights of your tender soul in formless forms in eccentric accents aching in aloneness... oooooo my goodness !!! mindfulness mirrors memories I hoard within titanium trays of masked melancholy… damn the eeeireeeenessss this is line… but I long for you to wear chronicles carved within my cold conscience… girrrrrrl I’ll wear anything any me to aeee !!! I’ll be on the floor just like that lady in the art is u want me to !! let me stay .. come! ..stretched in the still solitary sketch of surrealism ... Listen! Be stretched anywhere with my radar !!!! Stretch on me if u like … I dnt mind ae! This piece is woven to an absolute perfection papi!!!
Empress Avatar
June 2, 2026 at 9:29 AM
Lolol gosh! Too funny papi! Thank u ! I love this artpiece! I think its my new fave from Dali
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