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July 28, 2025, entered in Robert James Liguori's Carnival Night Poetry Contest

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The carnival came once a year. My friends and I could hardly wait. The lively music reached us long before we ever reached the gate. We’d pay our dollar to get in and join in with the jostling throng. Our laughter added to the noise-- that wild, discordant, happy “song.” “Come win a goldfish—over here!” “No thanks!” I held my money tight. The Ferris Wheel and Tilt-a-Whirl caused us to squeal with pure delight. Now grandkids cheer from creaking rides, the ones I fear I rode back in the sixties! Now I cringe feet from the grinding gears. The screeching fades and they emerge. We make our way around the fair. I hear a shout: “Win goldfish. It’s your lucky night!” I say, “No thanks” because I doubt it is. The fair in some respects is as it was when I was ten— the jolly music and the maze of noisy rides and people. When the youngsters’ grand experience has ended, I’ll go home and lie in bed and think of just how fast those childhood pleasures pass us by.

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Date: 7/28/2025 8:38:00 PM
Thanks for the memories in this fine poem about the carnival Janice. Have a pleasant week, my friend. Bill
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/29/2025 8:42:00 AM
Thanks so much, Bill. Glad you liked it. Janice
Date: 7/28/2025 2:50:00 PM
beautifully described, janice! i could picture it perfectly...
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/29/2025 8:43:00 AM
Ilene, thanks so much for the positive feedback. Janice
Date: 7/28/2025 1:54:00 PM
Sweetly recalled. These fun moments of your life. I adored carnivals but now the rides give me nausea
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/29/2025 8:45:00 AM
Thanks so much, Andrea. When I was in my thirties, I had to stop getting on all of the rides except the Ferris Wheel! Janice
Date: 7/28/2025 1:25:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your fun/wonderful ~ write/story. As a young child I went a few times and loved it. Then we moved and no more. "Good Luck" Have a blessed/fun day writing away..............
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/29/2025 8:48:00 AM
Thanks so much, Paula. When I was a kid, I could take $3 and experience all of the rides. Of course, that was a little over 60 years ago! :-) Janice
Date: 7/28/2025 12:00:00 PM
what wonderful childhood memories you can now share with the little ones - what a charming poem Janice! hugs Jan xx
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/29/2025 8:49:00 AM
Jan, your response to my poem has me smiling. Thanks so much! Janice
Date: 7/28/2025 11:49:00 AM
What an excellent poem, Janice. It centers on the longing for bygone carnival days and the sad recognition of how swiftly those times fly by. While realizing the natural changes that come with aging, you consider the delight of youth.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/29/2025 8:50:00 AM
Sotto Poet, I SO appreciate your response to my poem!! Janice

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