The Annual County Carnival
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July 28, 2025, entered in Robert James Liguori's Carnival Night Poetry Contest
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The carnival came once a year.
My friends and I could hardly wait.
The lively music reached us long
before we ever reached the gate.
We’d pay our dollar to get in
and join in with the jostling throng.
Our laughter added to the noise--
that wild, discordant, happy “song.”
“Come win a goldfish—over here!”
“No thanks!” I held my money tight.
The Ferris Wheel and Tilt-a-Whirl
caused us to squeal with pure delight.
Now grandkids cheer from creaking rides,
the ones I fear I rode back in
the sixties! Now I cringe feet from
the grinding gears. The screeching fades
and they emerge. We make our way
around the fair. I hear a shout:
“Win goldfish. It’s your lucky night!”
I say, “No thanks” because I doubt
it is. The fair in some respects
is as it was when I was ten—
the jolly music and the maze
of noisy rides and people. When
the youngsters’ grand experience
has ended, I’ll go home and lie
in bed and think of just how fast
those childhood pleasures pass us by.
Copyright © Janice Canerdy | Year Posted 2025
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