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The Angels Sing-W

O lord, lack virtues Teach us mercy, love,Holiness To teach on return. ====================== Tenth place winner Contest: "Sunday Senryu" "Angelic Anthem" of Landa-marie, the sweetheart

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Robin Davis

Date: 5/8/2014 8:39:00 AM

Dr. Ram So few words but loaded with wisdom, deepness, truth and power. Thank you for the nice comment on my Cowboys poem.

Kaila B.A

Date: 8/18/2010 4:47:00 AM

you are a brilliant poet!! love it!

Brandee Augustus

Date: 8/13/2010 1:23:00 PM

I am quite sure that this is definitely one of things that the angels sing about concerning us as humans. Congratulations! This is spot on!

Susan Mills

Date: 8/12/2010 2:23:00 PM

Congratulations on your win! What a terriffic Sunday senyru! Love, Susan

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/12/2010 9:45:00 AM

Congratulations Dr. Ram on your win in Linda-Marie's contest" Sunday Senryu-An Angelic Anthem". Love, Carol

Constance La France

Date: 8/8/2010 9:17:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this heavenly senryu <*.*>

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/8/2010 6:59:00 PM

congrats on your win with this lovely senryu

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/8/2010 6:21:00 PM

Congrats Dr. Ram on your success in my Sunday Senryu contest with this beautiful entry.. appreciate your constant support ..with luv..

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/8/2010 1:40:00 PM

Lovely Senryu. Thank you for my 8th place in your Pantoum contest. It was a fun try at a new form. Love, Joyce

Date: 8/7/2010 10:30:00 PM

This is a wonderful Haiku. I enjoyed it. Thank you for all your nice comments on my poetry. Best wishes in the contest... Love Scarlett

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/7/2010 10:18:00 PM

It would be amazing if we adhere to your advice Dr Ram.. All the best for the contest ~ Wilma

Jay Del Fierro

Date: 8/7/2010 10:01:00 PM

no doubt,even in these times,as we struggle to relate and understand the conflicts we all share,directly or indirectly... very nice senryu with a thought provoking theme....peace , jay

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/7/2010 9:00:00 PM

A beautiful prayer, Dr. Ram. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/7/2010 8:03:00 PM

enjoyed reading today, truly uplifting work!

Charles Henderson

Date: 8/7/2010 7:07:00 PM

Lovely thought Dr. Ram. It would do us all good to do a little learning and teaching. Charles