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07.08.2024

- Killick -

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The calendar showed January 1899, there were only a few hours of real daylight He set out in his poor man's boat, early dawn Snow and ice did not melt until mid-May The cold bit his face and hands, he had to try to obtain some food on the table All they had was flatbread, oats and water porridge A sudden storm forced him to seek shelter He had to be master of his own destiny Strong east wind prevented him from going ashore The best possibility was to anchor in a cove sheltered from the wind Grandfather's killick saved him from drowning that day

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Date: 8/8/2025 8:40:00 PM
Your story is grpping, Anne-Lise. I'm glad it had a happy outcome. Fascinating! :)
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Date: 8/8/2025 12:37:00 PM
An intriguing story. Feels sadly hopeless, however the ending gives it bright, airy windows and a safe door out. Enjoyed this write ! Thank you for sharing, Anne-Lise!
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Date: 8/8/2025 11:28:00 AM
Enjoyed! …All they had was flatbread, oats and water porridge…The killick was the anchor in the storm.
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Date: 8/8/2025 8:25:00 AM
Lots of knowledge came before us, those great anchors of old worth holding on to, and often revisiting. Brilliant story. Love it! My Great grandfather, captain of a sail ship went down with his ship in a storm.
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Date: 8/8/2025 5:11:00 AM
You painted life, dear poet, and its struggles, especially with the sea, glad he made it, or you might not be here today creating poetry...Frederic
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/8/2025 5:18:00 AM
- Not my life ... I wasn't born in 1899, Frederic :))) - Thank you very much for your comment :) - hugs
Date: 8/8/2025 3:55:00 AM
Gorgeous and intriguing, Anne-Lise, you have vividly depicted this historical event. I could sense the frigid gusts of wind, the impending threat of the tempest, and the silent fortitude required for perseverance.
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Date: 8/8/2025 5:20:00 AM
- At that time it was their everyday life ... on life and death - Thank you very much for your comment, Las :) - hugs
Date: 8/8/2025 1:43:00 AM
beautiful, but now I a curious, did he make it? :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/8/2025 1:58:00 AM
- "Grandfather's killick saved him from drowning that day" yes, he survived... but didn't catch any fish, Arthur :) - hugs
Date: 8/7/2025 6:57:00 PM
Vivid and atmospheric, Anne-Lise—you’ve brought this moment in time to life so clearly. I could feel the icy wind, the danger of the storm, and the quiet resilience of survival.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/8/2025 2:01:00 AM
- That's how they lived at that time in Norway ... many ended their lives at sea to provide food for their families ... it was a tough time along the coast, Rowena - hugs
Date: 8/7/2025 5:08:00 PM
thanks for sharing this story via your poem. It was engaging and encouraging...great contest entry, wishing you a great evening, hugs. Sara
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/8/2025 2:04:00 AM
- Poverty drove them out to sea in all kinds of weather... the luckiest came home... but many drowned, Sara - hugs
Date: 8/7/2025 2:58:00 PM
Anne-Lise, I would guess Norway. Ja?
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Date: 8/8/2025 1:56:00 AM
- A story from Norwegian conditions from that time, they were poor and depended on getting fish from the sea - Fish and potatoes were the most important food source, Connie :) - hugs

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