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The Anatomy of a Break-Up

I choose elective surgery. Yes, that will do the trick. Make my inside match my outside so I'm no longer sick. First, I'll take my heart out, remove it from my chest, scrub away the pain of you, but choose to leave the rest. Then I'll pluck my eyeballs, right out of my skull filter them with shades of rose so life won't be so dull. Then I'll saw my head off so I can see my brain. I'll sanitize it thoroughly, so no sad thought remains. I'll sandpaper my lips down until they've lost your kiss. With no sense memory remaining there'll be nothing left to miss. But then I must peel off every single fingertip, if I'm to lose the feeling of touching your soft lips. I will plug my ears with tar, so I can't hear your song. And as my head grows heavy, it's destined to grow strong. Now I must plug my nose so I can't be deceived into thinking you are near when at long last I am freed. And I elect to cut my tongue out of my head so I'll no longer crave the taste of things unsaid. And once I've cleared my senses of their memories of you, I'll look into the mirror and see my work is through. But wait, something has happened! I don't know what that is. It appears something is missing, for it needs a soul to live.

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Date: 2/3/2016 10:32:00 PM
Sally, thank you for the wonderful reply
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Date: 2/2/2016 7:33:00 AM
Hi Sally. Congrats for your #3 placement in the contest!!!! ;-)
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Date: 2/1/2016 7:17:00 PM
Sally, congrats on your pensive write!
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Sally Bowles
Date: 2/2/2016 12:49:00 AM
Thank you so much Balveen! X
Date: 2/1/2016 4:09:00 PM
Deep write, Sally, lovely win. LINDA
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Sally Bowles
Date: 2/2/2016 12:48:00 AM
Linda, thanks for visiting and commenting. Appreciate your kindness. X
Date: 2/1/2016 3:21:00 PM
Hi Sally,, Congratulations on your win. SKAT
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Sally Bowles
Date: 2/2/2016 12:47:00 AM
Thanks for the congrats Skat! And for the continued support! X
Date: 2/1/2016 12:46:00 PM
This poem is simply brilliant. It deserves to be on top. Congratulations! #7 Cheers, Connie
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Date: 2/2/2016 12:47:00 AM
Thank you Connie! I'm so glad that you enjoyed it! X
Date: 2/1/2016 1:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! I really liked how you did this, very clever, very well written. A 7
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Sally Bowles
Date: 2/2/2016 12:47:00 AM
Susan, thank you so much for your kind words!
Date: 2/1/2016 1:52:00 AM
Sally, congratulations on your win in Viv's contest with this deep and powerful write ~
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Sally Bowles
Date: 2/2/2016 12:46:00 AM
Thanks Constance, and congrats to you on your beautiful win! X
Date: 2/1/2016 1:42:00 AM
Congrats Sally on your win. The best surgeon I have found is time.
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Sally Bowles
Date: 2/2/2016 12:45:00 AM
Thanks for the congrats Rob and for sharing your insight. X

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