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The Ambiance of Amber Light a Poetic Collaboration With Susan Ashley

The Ambiance of Amber Light



I watch the morning glow behind you
inviting my eyes to pause in soft amber light
which frames your beauty
warming my heart with a smile
bursting the seeds of passion
allowing them to float endlessly...through my soul
pouring desire into the eyes of love
until they overflow and drip like dew from leaves
glistening in the sun spiraling towards Earth
leaving a wondrous glint in the eyes
could that this moment never end
nor escape into the unknown

Bathed is my essence in sweet dew of dawn
and wondrous is the glint that luster your eyes
as I radiate morning-glory grandeur
within your golden gaze of ardor
whose fervent seeds sow saffron dreams
wishing to possess and be possessed
I reach for you surrendering in softest amber light
luscious in the bloom of morn
captured in the nectar of each breath
taken in the heated heights of desire's depths
this moment an amaranth
thrilling this twinkling of time never to fade like a distant star




My gratitude to Susan and her beautiful mind and heart
for her help and kindness

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 6/7/2019 5:46:00 PM
Hello Fredrick Parker, You both did a beautiful job on this poem. All the words flowed beautifully together. have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 6/5/2019 10:57:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 6/4/2019 8:31:00 PM
I'm no prophet but I did say this should be POTD, and voila, it happened!!! Congrats to you both.
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Date: 6/4/2019 8:41:00 AM
Congratulations Frederic...and your co-star Susan...All the best
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Date: 6/4/2019 8:27:00 AM
My good friend, a truly wonderful collaboration! Every verse a golden treat and cast in the romantic light of love in its purest essence. You and Susan both have gifted us and the world such beautiful images of pure and faithful love in these superbly crafted verses! Congratulations on this gem being awarded POTD! A fav..
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Date: 6/4/2019 5:46:00 AM
What an artistic creation by two of PS greats, Susan and Frederic, please accept my belated congratulations on your well deserved POTD. Even the title chosen conjours up the warmth and passion that flows through your wondrous poetry. Bravo....Maria Hugs
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Date: 6/3/2019 7:18:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats on a very well deserved POTD, congrats to you both:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/3/2019 7:08:00 PM
This is so beautiful, magical soft and serene. Passionate and tender, all at the same time. Your thoughts collide with elegance and grace. Congratulations Frederic and Susan, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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Date: 6/3/2019 3:56:00 PM
Good work , I love the pattern and rhyme. Bravo Frederic.
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Date: 6/3/2019 10:12:00 AM
What a treat of music and poetry. Just beautiful. I didn't know there was music until a commenter mentioned it, and then I went to your home page and got it. So, so restful and beautiful to start the morning. A fave. Congratulations to both of you!
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Date: 6/3/2019 8:16:00 AM
Congrats!! dear poets...top of the morning and top of the line...very suiting honors for POTD!!...superb writing Suesy Que and Frederick...^WW^...{*J*}
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Date: 6/3/2019 8:12:00 AM
What a beauty Susan and Frederick - congratulations to both of you on being honored with POTD. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/3/2019 7:54:00 AM
- Congratulations to both of you .... a beautiful write :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/3/2019 7:49:00 AM
Beautiful and sensual !! Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 6/3/2019 7:01:00 AM
Beautiful collaboration..Congrats on POTD..
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Date: 6/3/2019 5:01:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD with this beautiful collaboration, enjoyed!
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Date: 6/3/2019 4:55:00 AM
Two wonderful poets creating poetic gold. Congratulations to you and Susan on POTD. Tom.
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Date: 6/2/2019 6:11:00 PM
Dear Frederic, my imagination was enchanted by your artistic and romantic muse. Thank you for your invitation to spill passionate poetic ink, it was such joy to create poetry with you, dear poet. Warmest wishes always my kind and inspiring friend.. ~Susan
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Susan Ashley
Date: 6/2/2019 7:35:00 PM
P.S. such a moving and beautiful video clip to accompany the poem, as well.. quite a lovely choice.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 6/2/2019 7:12:00 PM
you and your poetry are a blessing dear poet, and as such, it would have been a sin not to...
Date: 6/2/2019 2:31:00 PM
Wonderful write, congrats to you both, your mutual talent is on full display in this luscious write! This should be POTD!
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Date: 6/2/2019 7:58:00 AM
an outstanding collaboration between to excellent poets, the stanzas flow so seamlessly I have no idea who wrote what. adding this gem to my faves:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/2/2019 7:34:00 AM
What a wonderful collaboration by two very talented poets... ambience is really captured through your words...
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