The Altar of Pride

When war jets go screaming by, bombed-out homes morph into tombs. And as fire ignites the sky, scared souls cringe in basement rooms. As loved ones pray for lost souls, broken hearts shatter like glass. And anger's smoldering coals are fanned by the cost of gas. Retracing steps prophets trod; only leads to their shared fate. For blood stains the hands of God; when His name sanctifies hate. There is no peace found with age when belief divides each side. For young and old heap their rage upon the altar of pride. Martyrs once traversed these sands, preaching love with their last breath. Yet, some say God understands when they link His name to death. Jews, Christians, and Muslims share the one same God up above. And yet, each believes they're more deserving of His love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Gauthier Avatar
March 16, 2018 at 2:02 PM
Powerful message of irony: "Jews Christians and Muslims share the one same God up above. And yet each believes they're more deserving of His love." Strong poem, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
March 16, 2018 at 2:16 PM
Thanks Line, your comments and encouragements are most appreciated my friend, Emile.
A  Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 1:05 PM
Emile, congrats on your wonderful win. SKAT love :)
Pinet Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 9:24 AM
Thanks Skat, I appreciate your comments and support. Emile.
A. Sharma Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 4:23 AM
Real Power of One Emile, wonderful thoughts! Congrats on superb win!
Pinet Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 8:16 AM
Thanks Upma, I appreciate your input. Emile.
Nunez Avatar
September 13, 2015 at 12:39 PM
A thoughtful analysis of how pride has entered what should have been occupied only by the One true God. Good take, Emile. Congrats!
Pinet Avatar
September 13, 2015 at 4:15 PM
Thanks Kim, I appreciate your input. Emile.
Allison Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 6:22 PM
thought provoking write Emile congrats on your win I hope many read your message:-) hugs jan xx
Pinet Avatar
September 13, 2015 at 7:53 AM
Thanks Jan, your comments are always appreciated. Emile.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 6:16 AM
Excellent write Emile, my reaction, each of us have liberty choosing what to follow..... let's leave it to our heart of hearts to distinguish the truth... We must believe in the Spirit of truth... Our personal relationship to God and the way we so walk to His will is the most important...~Olive Eloisa =`)
Pinet Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 8:52 AM
Thanks so much Olive, as always I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Hopper Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 11:47 AM
No one person is more deserving of his love than another. This is a beautiful prediction of the day and time that our God does come back. Thanks for the share!
Pinet Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 1:55 PM
Thanks Anna, I appreciate your comment. Emile.
Nyaga Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 6:10 AM
a great poem which is very relevant and calls to mind an issue many don't want to face... wars are fought by men seeking domination over others.. God is just a pretense they give.. its all about power and lust for more power.. God is love and in love we make peace... happy are the peace makers for they shall be called sons of God*******Blessings
Pinet Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 8:35 AM
Thanks Lewis, I appreciate your comment. Emile.
Muideen Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 7:02 PM
A well and a lovely descriptive Emile. I love how it was constructed; it is excellent as always.......A.M.
Pinet Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 8:37 AM
Thanks Lewis, as always I appreciate your comments. Emile.
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