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The Alchemist

A leadened heart devoid of trust until an alchemist came along, turning it into gold- Or so it seemed... Trust, broken trust. It was now a locket that held secrets, that had a key protected by fear Hidden in the darkness of silence- Or so it seemed... Secrets, imprisoned secrets. There was one escape, only through tears, tarnishing the heart all the more Somehow encrusting it forever- Or so it seemed... Tears, overflowing tears. This river led to the sea of silence, and stayed there. Eerily still, no undercurrents perceived- Or so it seemed... Silence, deafening silence. Numbing, unwavering trepidation, kept all those unwanted secrets safe Weakening the heart, deeming it hopeless- Or so it seemed... Trepidation, paralyzing trepidation. But fear also harnesses strength and the alchemist within was the key Breaking the silence, unlocking the secrets- And so it was... Strength, energizing strength. This eventually led to tenacity, tears hardening into diamonds of courage Allowing the waves of silence to finally crash And so it was... Tenacity, freeing tenacity. The heart now had a soaring spirit, with a fire emboldening other hearts Infinitely turning lead into gold- And so it is... Spirit, emblazoning spirit. This thus far is the story of one heart's triumph, written for the world to know Giving hope and gilding hearts- And so it will be... Triumph, crowning triumph!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/2/2012 9:14:00 PM
nikko Congratulations on your poem featured this week...have a Nice one...pd
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Date: 2/27/2012 3:47:00 PM
Congrats Nikko on "The Alchemist" being featured. How about that! Your birthday and we got the present, one of your poems highlighted.
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Date: 2/27/2012 5:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Nikko. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/24/2011 4:27:00 AM
I love your premise. Is this about people that keep everything bottled up inside? I want to be sure I understood this. I've read it a couple of times, but I'm not quite sure I got everything. I think it's about inner strength and facing your fears and opening up to your feelings. Please do say if I got it wrong.
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Date: 2/27/2012 10:30:00 AM
Date: 2/24/2011 10:08:00 AM
Congratulations Nikko, on your well deserved win for your poem in Debbie Guzzi's contest "Anything Goes". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/15/2011 11:57:00 AM
Another win for this awesome poem, Nikko. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/15/2011 1:52:00 AM
Profound writing, Nikko. Many congrats on your win with this one. Lainie
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Date: 2/14/2011 10:38:00 PM
flying high, my buds!! relished this with HEADS UP cheers for the great win, nikks! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/14/2011 8:18:00 PM
Congrats Nikko on your HM in Debbie's contest with this brilliant beauty my sweet friend.. enjoy your very special honor on a very special Valentine's Day..luv..
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Date: 2/14/2011 8:05:00 PM
You have written this entry very well Nikko. Congratulations on attaining honorable mention with your writing.
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Date: 2/14/2011 8:04:00 PM
beautiful. Many congrats
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Date: 2/14/2011 6:55:00 PM
very nice Nikki. congratulations on your placement. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/30/2010 2:45:00 PM
Varying piece of emotions.. The bondage of silence a testimony of ones fear of judgement and the eventual wake up and the discovery of strength within to rise above.. You captured it perfectly. We tend to suffer in silence! Awesome write..
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Date: 3/8/2010 10:43:00 PM
Hey Nikko, just noticing I had never congratulated for placing so high in this contest. Way to go! andrea
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Date: 3/6/2010 7:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your success with this one. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/22/2010 3:03:00 AM
Creative write, Nikko. A one-of-a-kind rare anthology. Congratulations on winning this contest. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 2/15/2010 2:21:00 PM
Congratulations Nikko, on your success in the “Tending The Sprouts” contest sponsored by: Catie Lindsey with this delightful poem. I'm seeing your name on a lot of winner's lists. Good job. It's easy to see why you are winning so often. Your poetic skills shine. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 2/10/2010 6:05:00 PM
Most fascinating piece of poetry, Nikko!! Goes to my favs. My congratulations on your 6th Place win the "Sprouts" Contest! Great job! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 2/10/2010 2:20:00 PM
Congrats Nikko on your winning poem in the Sprouts contest... another amazing write... another amazing win... another enjoyable read and victory... luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 2/10/2010 1:05:00 PM
What doesn't kill us, makes us stronger. There is a lot of wisdom in this great poem. Congratulations on your success in Catie's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/10/2010 12:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Catie's contest with this poem Nikko. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/17/2010 7:10:00 AM
NIko, we BOTH need more poems for each other to read, but I guess I still have more of yours to see!!! And here is another shiny example of how you craft your work so carefully. Love how you use metaphors and refrains like the one in this beautiful poem. LUv, andrea
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Date: 10/11/2009 12:38:00 PM
Beautiful poetry. All the best.
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Date: 10/11/2009 11:57:00 AM
Nikko, for some reason I was unable to open your mail. Think the Soup is having some technical problems.
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Date: 10/11/2009 11:48:00 AM
You set the scene well with the trepidation and silence, Nikko. And I literally got chills when I read the verse that begins with "But fear also harnesses strength." Surely, it does. When we learn to face our fears and proceed boldly our emblazoned spirits can turn "lead into gold." There is so much hope in this uplifting write; it's absolutely a favorite for me. Excellent concept and execution! Love, Carolyn
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