The Alchemist

A leadened heart devoid of trust
until an alchemist came along,
turning it into gold-
Or so it seemed...
Trust, broken trust.

 
It was now a locket that held secrets,
that had a key protected by fear
Hidden in the darkness of silence-
Or so it seemed...
Secrets, imprisoned secrets.

 
There was one escape, only through tears,
tarnishing the heart all the more
Somehow encrusting it forever-
Or so it seemed...
Tears, overflowing tears.
 

This river led to the sea of silence,
and stayed there.
Eerily still, no undercurrents perceived-
Or so it seemed...
Silence, deafening silence.

 
Numbing, unwavering trepidation,
kept all those unwanted secrets safe
Weakening the heart, deeming it hopeless-
Or so it seemed...
Trepidation, paralyzing trepidation.

 
But fear also harnesses strength
and the alchemist within was the key
Breaking the silence, unlocking the secrets-
And so it was...
Strength, energizing strength.

 
This eventually led to tenacity,
tears hardening into diamonds of courage
Allowing the waves of silence to finally crash
And so it was...
Tenacity, freeing tenacity.


The heart now had a soaring spirit,
with a fire emboldening other hearts
Infinitely turning lead into gold-
And so it is...
Spirit, emblazoning spirit.

 
This thus far is the story of one heart's triumph,
written for the world to know
Giving hope and gilding hearts-
And so it will be...
Triumph, crowning triumph!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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A   Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 9:14 PM
nikko Congratulations on your poem featured this week...have a Nice one...pd
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February 27, 2012 at 3:47 PM
Congrats Nikko on "The Alchemist" being featured. How about that! Your birthday and we got the present, one of your poems highlighted.
Brown Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 5:30 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Nikko. Love, Carol
R Avatar
May 24, 2011 at 4:27 AM
I love your premise. Is this about people that keep everything bottled up inside? I want to be sure I understood this. I've read it a couple of times, but I'm not quite sure I got everything. I think it's about inner strength and facing your fears and opening up to your feelings. Please do say if I got it wrong.
Mishra Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 10:30 AM
Brown Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 10:08 AM
Congratulations Nikko, on your well deserved win for your poem in Debbie Guzzi's contest "Anything Goes". Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
February 15, 2011 at 11:57 AM
Another win for this awesome poem, Nikko. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
George   Avatar
February 15, 2011 at 1:52 AM
Profound writing, Nikko. Many congrats on your win with this one. Lainie
Onclaud Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 10:38 PM
flying high, my buds!! relished this with HEADS UP cheers for the great win, nikks! :) huggs, nette
Sweetheart Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 8:18 PM
Congrats Nikko on your HM in Debbie's contest with this brilliant beauty my sweet friend.. enjoy your very special honor on a very special Valentine's Day..luv..
Pettit Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 8:05 PM
You have written this entry very well Nikko. Congratulations on attaining honorable mention with your writing.
Mannan Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 8:04 PM
beautiful. Many congrats
Johnson Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 6:55 PM
very nice Nikki. congratulations on your placement. Love, Joyce
Neels Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 2:45 PM
Varying piece of emotions.. The bondage of silence a testimony of ones fear of judgement and the eventual wake up and the discovery of strength within to rise above.. You captured it perfectly. We tend to suffer in silence! Awesome write..
Dietrich Avatar
March 8, 2010 at 10:43 PM
Hey Nikko, just noticing I had never congratulated for placing so high in this contest. Way to go! andrea
Freeman Avatar
March 6, 2010 at 7:50 PM
Congratulations on your success with this one. Agape, Moses
Villarosa Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 3:03 AM
Creative write, Nikko. A one-of-a-kind rare anthology. Congratulations on winning this contest. (^_^) Noel.
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February 15, 2010 at 2:21 PM
Congratulations Nikko, on your success in the “Tending The Sprouts” contest sponsored by: Catie Lindsey with this delightful poem. I'm seeing your name on a lot of winner's lists. Good job. It's easy to see why you are winning so often. Your poetic skills shine. Lovingly, Dane Ann
Haick Avatar
February 10, 2010 at 6:05 PM
Most fascinating piece of poetry, Nikko!! Goes to my favs. My congratulations on your 6th Place win the "Sprouts" Contest! Great job! Peace and love, Audrey
Sweetheart Avatar
February 10, 2010 at 2:20 PM
Congrats Nikko on your winning poem in the Sprouts contest... another amazing write... another amazing win... another enjoyable read and victory... luv.. Linda-Marie
Devonshire Avatar
February 10, 2010 at 1:05 PM
What doesn't kill us, makes us stronger. There is a lot of wisdom in this great poem. Congratulations on your success in Catie's contest. Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
February 10, 2010 at 12:35 PM
Congratulations on your win in Catie's contest with this poem Nikko. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 7:10 AM
NIko, we BOTH need more poems for each other to read, but I guess I still have more of yours to see!!! And here is another shiny example of how you craft your work so carefully. Love how you use metaphors and refrains like the one in this beautiful poem. LUv, andrea
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October 11, 2009 at 12:38 PM
Beautiful poetry. All the best.
Devonshire Avatar
October 11, 2009 at 11:57 AM
Nikko, for some reason I was unable to open your mail. Think the Soup is having some technical problems.
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October 11, 2009 at 11:48 AM
You set the scene well with the trepidation and silence, Nikko. And I literally got chills when I read the verse that begins with "But fear also harnesses strength." Surely, it does. When we learn to face our fears and proceed boldly our emblazoned spirits can turn "lead into gold." There is so much hope in this uplifting write; it's absolutely a favorite for me. Excellent concept and execution! Love, Carolyn
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