The Aftermath

Meaning is over there,
beyond the burnt paddocks
and blackened hills, 
the crumpled, flattened ruins
of houses. It is further out
than that nothingness glazed
upon the distances 
of a vacant stare.

A powdery dust now coates
the walls of a terrible absence.
There is a gaping silence,
a hole emptied of screams,
of moans, cries given up
to heaven. What was living
has been burnt back 
to where only 
a dull numbness 
chafes against passing time.

Melted pots poke through
a tangle of charcoaled waste. 
Memories, lifetimes crumble
into flakes of ash and amongst 
the rubble, 
a fire blackened teddy bear 
with outstretched arms
seems baked in a posture
of perpetual still,
holding onto something
beyond the reach of fire.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 2/22/2024 1:02:00 AM
We have experienced - not directly, of course, but the devastation of bushfires here in Australia, 2019 being one of the worst. Now days driving through the hills one cannot help but marvel at the resilience of nature where all the trees have regenerated, sides of the trees sprouted into new branches. Did you know that in Oz, bushfires and their extreme heat are natures way of cracking open the hard shells of the the seeds in order for them to germinate. thanks for sharing - Stay safe - Maria
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Paul Willason
Date: 2/23/2024 1:21:00 AM
Many thanks for your comments Maria. The threat of bushfires hang over summer with a persistent unease. We lived in the Dandenong Ranges just outside Melbourne and were always pacI ed and ready to leave when approached the high 30's. Now we live near the coast..summers are more relaxed. Native bushland may regenerate quite quickly...regrettably lives and property are less tolerant. Take care...
Date: 2/16/2024 4:48:00 AM
Paul, a chilling poem, you captured the emotions of loss and devastation.
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Paul Willason
Date: 2/17/2024 5:07:00 PM
Value yr comments Tania and for taking the time to read...as you said, rather chilling. The devastation caused by bushfires push those effected into an unimaginable space...tried to capture a little of that. Thankyou.
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Paul Willason
Date: 2/17/2024 5:07:00 PM
Value yr comments Tania and for taking the time to read...as you said, rather chilling. The devastation caused by bushfires push those effected into an unimaginable space...tried to capture a little of that. Thankyou.
Date: 2/16/2024 4:45:00 AM
You’ve pieced together a scene of devastation and left me wondering if the horse and people escaped. The last two lines of the first verse were strikingly written.
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Paul Willason
Date: 2/17/2024 5:01:00 PM
Bush fires in Australia are all too common...this poem arose out of the imagery from a recent event. The devastation and cost challenges the human mind to digest and process. Unlike many in the past, this recent bushfire thankfully resulted in no loss of life and was confined to properties...hellish for those impacted. Thanks for diving into this poem Lin...difficult.
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