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The Aftermath

Meaning is over there, beyond the burnt paddocks and blackened hills, the crumpled, flattened ruins of houses. It is further out than that nothingness glazed upon the distances of a vacant stare. A powdery dust now coates the walls of a terrible absence. There is a gaping silence, a hole emptied of screams, of moans, cries given up to heaven. What was living has been burnt back to where only a dull numbness chafes against passing time. Melted pots poke through a tangle of charcoaled waste. Memories, lifetimes crumble into flakes of ash and amongst the rubble, a fire blackened teddy bear with outstretched arms seems baked in a posture of perpetual still, holding onto something beyond the reach of fire.

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Date: 2/22/2024 1:02:00 AM
We have experienced - not directly, of course, but the devastation of bushfires here in Australia, 2019 being one of the worst. Now days driving through the hills one cannot help but marvel at the resilience of nature where all the trees have regenerated, sides of the trees sprouted into new branches. Did you know that in Oz, bushfires and their extreme heat are natures way of cracking open the hard shells of the the seeds in order for them to germinate. thanks for sharing - Stay safe - Maria
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Paul Willason
Date: 2/23/2024 1:21:00 AM
Many thanks for your comments Maria. The threat of bushfires hang over summer with a persistent unease. We lived in the Dandenong Ranges just outside Melbourne and were always pacI ed and ready to leave when approached the high 30's. Now we live near the coast..summers are more relaxed. Native bushland may regenerate quite quickly...regrettably lives and property are less tolerant. Take care...
Date: 2/16/2024 3:22:00 PM
your poem was engaging and gut wrenching. You visually drew an evocative image of the fire's destruction. I especially liked these lines: Memories, lifetimes crumble into flakes of ash and amongst the rubble. I read your poem a couple of times and wondered if it was somehow metaphorical of a dark period of the burning fire within leaving memories, etc., in ashes. The teddy bear in that interpretation is symbolic of childhood or one's innocence. If such is the case this poem is deeply layered.
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Paul Willason
Date: 2/17/2024 5:46:00 PM
Poem was fed images from a recent bushfire and the subsequent processing. The indiscriminate nature of the destruction raises many profound questions. Like many of my poems written in a somewhat dreamlike state the subconscious can easily insert itself with other agendas. I am sure there are layers lurking in this poem. The teddy bear reference surfaced as an image of faith in the transcendent...when there is an absence of meaning.. it is the only thing the mind can hold onto.
Date: 2/16/2024 7:15:00 AM
I'm not sure I breathed at all reading that. Heart wrenching. (Also beautifully written)
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Paul Willason
Date: 2/17/2024 5:13:00 PM
Thanks DD. Poem surfaced as a result of images that came out of a recent bushfire in this State. Always harrowing and confronting...loss becoming graphic and inescapable. Confronting subject .
Date: 2/16/2024 4:48:00 AM
Paul, a chilling poem, you captured the emotions of loss and devastation.
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Paul Willason
Date: 2/17/2024 5:07:00 PM
Value yr comments Tania and for taking the time to read...as you said, rather chilling. The devastation caused by bushfires push those effected into an unimaginable space...tried to capture a little of that. Thankyou.
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Paul Willason
Date: 2/17/2024 5:07:00 PM
Value yr comments Tania and for taking the time to read...as you said, rather chilling. The devastation caused by bushfires push those effected into an unimaginable space...tried to capture a little of that. Thankyou.
Date: 2/16/2024 4:45:00 AM
You’ve pieced together a scene of devastation and left me wondering if the horse and people escaped. The last two lines of the first verse were strikingly written.
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Paul Willason
Date: 2/17/2024 5:01:00 PM
Bush fires in Australia are all too common...this poem arose out of the imagery from a recent event. The devastation and cost challenges the human mind to digest and process. Unlike many in the past, this recent bushfire thankfully resulted in no loss of life and was confined to properties...hellish for those impacted. Thanks for diving into this poem Lin...difficult.

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