Kp Nunez Poet Limerick

The Adventures of Jim the Trim - Holiday Cruise

On Jim the Trim's cruise, in a luxury liner
He was asked to be frisked, what a stinger!
You see, the alarm went off
He was taken and 'cuffed
Wee metal marbles, found in his boxer.











KIM PATRICE NUNEZ
18 April 2015

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Arthur Vaso April 24, 2015 at 10:34 PM Poor soul this Jim

Jerry T Curtis April 20, 2015 at 3:15 PM Hahaha Kim, I don't understand one thing, what's a guy with wee marbles doing with a Golf Tee, lol

Andrea Dietrich April 18, 2015 at 11:14 PM hahaha. what the heck was he doing with wee metal marbles!!

Lindsay Laurie April 18, 2015 at 8:55 PM G'day Kim... oh dear, some blokes just can't be themselves. Thanks for the grin Kim - Lindsay

Nette Onclaud April 18, 2015 at 4:38 PM gosh, you made me chuckle like crazy, kim.. a really greaat job!,, huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen April 18, 2015 at 12:30 PM - Oh, Kim :)))) ....find a reason to laugh everyday - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Emile Pinet April 18, 2015 at 10:28 AM Your humor and wit wrap themselves around your words and the effect is a smile. Emile.

John Williams April 18, 2015 at 8:27 AM Hi Kim, It's a very comical write, but i must admit I am still trying to figure out what it means. Anyway, it gave me a good laugh, I have never heard of that last line before, so very creative.....kind regards----John

James Peranteau April 18, 2015 at 7:49 AM A comical write dear poet ! I have NO idea where the metal marbles came from, or what their pupose was for Jim, but, who am I to question a man's needs ! *smiles* Have a wonderful weekend Kim.....much love, james James Peranteau April 18, 2015 at 8:02 AM O please....no......ok, let's clear up one thingy here dear poet, 'cause I knowz that artists are known fer the bazzar at times, But, not in this cavity KIM ! "Shiver me timbers" ! LOL

Jack Ellison April 18, 2015 at 7:40 AM Loved it dear Kim! Gave me a big chuckle... more please! Huggsies, Jack xxx

Jan Allison April 18, 2015 at 7:11 AM oops - made me giggle poor Jim:-) Hugs jan xx

Kevin Leake April 18, 2015 at 2:58 AM Continue with your great stories of Jim The Trim Kim, Can't wait for his next adventure!! Love it Kevin