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The Adventures of Jim the Trim - Holiday Cruise

On Jim the Trim's cruise, in a luxury liner He was asked to be frisked, what a stinger! You see, the alarm went off He was taken and 'cuffed Wee metal marbles, found in his boxer. KIM PATRICE NUNEZ 18 April 2015

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/24/2015 10:34:00 PM

Poor soul this Jim

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 4/20/2015 3:15:00 PM

Hahaha Kim, I don't understand one thing, what's a guy with wee marbles doing with a Golf Tee, lol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/18/2015 11:14:00 PM

hahaha. what the heck was he doing with wee metal marbles!!

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 4/18/2015 8:55:00 PM

G'day Kim... oh dear, some blokes just can't be themselves. Thanks for the grin Kim - Lindsay

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/18/2015 4:38:00 PM

gosh, you made me chuckle like crazy, kim.. a really greaat job!,, huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/18/2015 12:30:00 PM

- Oh, Kim :)))) ....find a reason to laugh everyday - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/18/2015 10:28:00 AM

Your humor and wit wrap themselves around your words and the effect is a smile. Emile.

John Williams

Date: 4/18/2015 8:27:00 AM

Hi Kim, It's a very comical write, but i must admit I am still trying to figure out what it means. Anyway, it gave me a good laugh, I have never heard of that last line before, so very creative.....kind regards----John

James Peranteau

Date: 4/18/2015 7:49:00 AM

A comical write dear poet ! I have NO idea where the metal marbles came from, or what their pupose was for Jim, but, who am I to question a man's needs ! *smiles* Have a wonderful weekend Kim.....much love, james

James Peranteau
Date: 4/18/2015 8:02:00 AM

O please....no......ok, let's clear up one thingy here dear poet, 'cause I knowz that artists are known fer the bazzar at times, But, not in this cavity KIM ! "Shiver me timbers" ! LOL

Jack Ellison

Date: 4/18/2015 7:40:00 AM

Loved it dear Kim! Gave me a big chuckle... more please! Huggsies, Jack xxx

Jan Allison

Date: 4/18/2015 7:11:00 AM

oops - made me giggle poor Jim:-) Hugs jan xx

Kevin Leake

Date: 4/18/2015 2:58:00 AM

Continue with your great stories of Jim The Trim Kim, Can't wait for his next adventure!! Love it Kevin