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The Adventures of Jim the Trim -Poolside

Now, Jim the Trim, you already know him He went to the pool, and there he met Kim He approached where she lays Thought he’d score for the day Where’s Jim? Knocked out, by prim and proper Kim! Thank you Arthur V, for lending Eve and Steve's pool! KIM PATRICE NUNEZ 28 February 2015

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/30/2015 9:06:00 AM

Ha ha, love it!

William Gray

Date: 3/6/2015 4:17:00 AM

Hi Kim!. What a great title. Loved this piece. Regards my friend!.

Kp Nunez
Date: 3/6/2015 4:29:00 AM

Thanks William! Glad you liked it! Appreciate much your visit and comment. All the best, Kim :D

Viv Wigley

Date: 3/4/2015 6:43:00 AM

It seems that Jim, in my book, deserved that cracking left hook for only a fool would do that by the pool and never mind touching- don't look! (splash) Great verse, Kim- need some summery images in this wintery weather. Viv x

Jack Ellison

Date: 3/3/2015 7:47:00 PM

Gave me a big tickle Miss Kim!!! LOL Huggsies, Jack xxx

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/3/2015 8:55:00 PM

"Jack and His CPAP" sounds too much like "Jack and His CRAP"! I order "The Isms of Jack"! LOL

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/3/2015 7:48:00 PM

Oh and I'm a guy!!!!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 3/3/2015 1:57:00 AM

hahahha cheers to kim!! go! go! go!.. :D!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/2/2015 6:46:00 PM

YOU GO GIRL. That is what I say to Kim!! Cute note you left to Arthur!!

Cherl Dunn

Date: 3/2/2015 1:31:00 PM

Dear Kim I'll give you a seven for perfection of humor my dear girl, loved it, just loved it, lol hope you didn't give him a cold pack either Lol again, thanks for your review of my tribute to Mystic Rose and yes she deserve everylast line of this write, cheri

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/1/2015 2:53:00 PM

Cute one. Enjoyed reading your humorous work. Thanks for stopping by. Sara

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 3/1/2015 1:11:00 AM

G'day Kim... It seems like a true tale. So, who cops it next, Mike Tyson? Enjoyed your limerick Kim - Lindsay

Kim Shaw

Date: 2/28/2015 10:29:00 PM

Hi Kim, a great limerick. I really enjoyed it! Hugs, Kim