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The Adventures of Jim the Trim -Poolside

Now, Jim the Trim, you already know him
                               He went to the pool, and there he met Kim
                                      He approached where she lays
                                      Thought he’d score for the day
                         Where’s Jim? Knocked out, by prim and proper Kim!









Thank you Arthur V, for lending Eve and Steve's pool!


KIM PATRICE NUNEZ
28 February 2015

Copyright © Kp Nunez | Year Posted 2015

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Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/30/2015 9:06:00 AM Ha ha, love it! Login to Reply

William Gray Date: 3/6/2015 4:17:00 AM Hi Kim!. What a great title. Loved this piece. Regards my friend!. Login to Reply Kp Nunez Date: 3/6/2015 4:29:00 AM Thanks William! Glad you liked it! Appreciate much your visit and comment. All the best, Kim :D

Viv Wigley Date: 3/4/2015 6:43:00 AM It seems that Jim, in my book, deserved that cracking left hook for only a fool would do that by the pool and never mind touching- don't look! (splash) Great verse, Kim- need some summery images in this wintery weather. Viv x Login to Reply

Jack Ellison Date: 3/3/2015 7:47:00 PM Gave me a big tickle Miss Kim!!! LOL Huggsies, Jack xxx Login to Reply Jack Ellison Date: 3/3/2015 8:55:00 PM "Jack and His CPAP" sounds too much like "Jack and His CRAP"! I order "The Isms of Jack"! LOL Jack Ellison Date: 3/3/2015 7:48:00 PM Oh and I'm a guy!!!!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 3/3/2015 1:57:00 AM hahahha cheers to kim!! go! go! go!.. :D! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/2/2015 6:46:00 PM YOU GO GIRL. That is what I say to Kim!! Cute note you left to Arthur!! Login to Reply

Cherl Dunn Date: 3/2/2015 1:31:00 PM Dear Kim I'll give you a seven for perfection of humor my dear girl, loved it, just loved it, lol hope you didn't give him a cold pack either Lol again, thanks for your review of my tribute to Mystic Rose and yes she deserve everylast line of this write, cheri Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/1/2015 2:53:00 PM Cute one. Enjoyed reading your humorous work. Thanks for stopping by. Sara Login to Reply

Lindsay Laurie Date: 3/1/2015 1:11:00 AM G'day Kim... It seems like a true tale. So, who cops it next, Mike Tyson? Enjoyed your limerick Kim - Lindsay Login to Reply

Kim Shaw Date: 2/28/2015 10:29:00 PM Hi Kim, a great limerick. I really enjoyed it! Hugs, Kim Login to Reply