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The Adventures of Jim the Trim - With a Lady

Now, Jim is a guy who cultures His zest for and boasts of his adventures But won't tell he met a lady He bowed down so gallantly That both of them had to catch his dentures. KIM PATRICE NUNEZ 19 March 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/5/2015 10:54:00 PM
Lol...poor Jim. Very creative. Great powers of imagination. Great humor. Thanks for the laughs #7
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Date: 3/31/2015 5:11:00 PM
Creative use of the Limerick form..I enjoyed reading t his one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 3/24/2015 6:03:00 AM
This made me smile, I bow before you with teeth firmly in tact.
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Date: 3/22/2015 11:12:00 PM
haha, the last line was a chuckle!!!
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Date: 3/21/2015 11:43:00 AM
I guess he was trying to take a bit out of life ( adventures ) ?, and lost it .
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Date: 3/21/2015 5:43:00 AM
Two words! Super Glue! Very Funny, love this wonderful festive write, thank you. Love, Armand.
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Date: 3/20/2015 7:32:00 AM
- Love your limerick .... big smile and big 7 - I wish you a beautiful weekend, dear Kim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/19/2015 11:35:00 PM
This write IS quite humorous dear poet ! I enjoyed ! Another Cary Grant I see..... ;).....have a wonderful week ...... much love, james
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Date: 3/19/2015 9:42:00 PM
Watch out for a man with removable teeth -- amazing things he can do! Loved the limerick, reminded me of my grandfather, I always saw his soaking in a jar in the bathroom! Grandma was always smiling though. 7
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Date: 3/19/2015 8:18:00 PM
Well done, with a sense of humor and a quick wit. I'm sure everyone got a chuckle from it. Emile.
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Date: 3/19/2015 5:18:00 PM
Loved it my dearest Kim! LOL I agree with Terry... you are a beauty! Why haven't you shown us before!!! Love and hugs, Jack xxx
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Date: 3/19/2015 4:57:00 PM
this made me smile - still have my own teeth lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/19/2015 3:40:00 PM
lol, panalo... this is humor at its best.. galling ng pinoy, kim.. go!.. huggs
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Date: 3/19/2015 3:36:00 PM
Haha, nicely done, a limerick for St Patrick's!
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